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Hey, I didn't know the story isn't over, and I'm so glad it isn't! Liked this part as well, here is my review: Neither of them knew what to do, ...

Hey! This is a great piece of work, I really liked it! You have a great vocabulary and I truly enjoyed reading this story. Here are a few more things ...

This is an amazing piece of work, I could not stop reading it. You have a great vocabulary, almost every sentence is perfectly worded, and the tone of this letter ...

EDIT: only now I see you revised this chapter. Well. Oops. Hey Vil! I ran into this lovely chapter, read it and had some notes, so here they are: 1. ...

Hey flame! That’s a really nice poem. Here are some things I’d like to point out: If the world was my oyster and I a pearl, it’s shell was shut ...

Hey Alice! Nice poem, thank you so much for sharing. I have mostly grammar-corrections, here they are: 1. We share the same genes, and sometimes the same “jeans.” I don't ...

I am mostly not into poems, but this one really moved me. I like the non-constant rhythm and the depth of this piece. It is very relatable, thank you for ...

Hey KaPo21! I'm here for a review. Let's start! The format you used here is messy, and probably wastes you too much time on organizing it. It's a bit difficult ...

Hey theosnowing! That's a great story. I love the choice of using second person - I have always wanted to write like that! The plot is very intriguing and you ...

Hey EM8650, That's a nice chapter! a few things I'd like to point out: Wrapping an arm around her Melanie rested her head on the girls shoulder. Wrapping an arm ...

Hey Horisun! Great poem. It's well-written, and the rhymes are really good! I have a few notes: I think its it's the way you speak, I believe you know that ...

Hey baranaxoy ! This is an amazing piece of work, I had so much fun reading it. Here are my notes: Glows-- or, my real astonished reactions: 1. The first ...

Hey Andrew! That is such a positive follow up, and I'm really glad you wrote and published it. It is a great closure. I have some notes, so let's start! ...

Hey! I'm back for more of that. Let's begin! 1. Punctuation I'd recommend you'd zoom in your screen to see where I added commas and full stops by using bold ...

Hey! That story seems really interesting just by reading the opening of it, so I'm going to read and review it at the same time. Let's start! And me, well ...