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1. Punctuation
I'd recommend you'd zoom in your screen to see where I added commas and full stops by using bold text.

And his clothes,... oOh, don’t get me started with his clothes[...]

That’s how you irk someone like me,. nNo, not as a person with autism, but as a person who has a problem with talking to people who stink like a skank from a bar on a Saturday Night[...]

“It’s rude to do that, Ms. Hicks.,” Hhe teased while getting closer to me[...]

You see, this is when I just stop listening[...]

Even if I wanted to be “involved”, my mom wouldn’t let me have any kind of social media besides a gaming app called Disord, which I begged her to let me have. She reluctantly agreed to my begging, or, well, silent treatment.

He stated, which I found bizarre because I found it very fucking disgusting that this guy, this random stinky skanky guy, wants to come up to me and spill his guts.

“Can you repeat every word you said to me but slowly please?” I asked plainly[...]

Girls fall for him, boys hate him, and me? He’s not even on my radar, but I heard of him, but he’s not even on my radar.

[...]he admitted, which I don’t blame[...]

Hello. Ken here for a review.
This is a very interesting piece. I love the narrative and the overall idea.

Looks like the main character is totally uninterested with the bitchy attitudes most girls exhibit at school. Lurking around the bad, the rich or the handsome dudes, making them look like some sort of cheap whores.
Perhaps she's more interested or attracted to guys who are smart, intelligent, etc. Is she sapiosexual?

“And I like different women,” Aren’t all women different? I don’t get men"
Oh. All women are different in looks but very similar in character! Like, they all want money they won't work for, cheap attention, gossiping, it goes on and on. Lol.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hi there
I'm CyberGenji and i'll be reviewing your work today.

1. "a male approached me"
I think replacing "male" with "guy", "man" or anything else would sound better.

2. "His face was covered with distraught"
the construction of the sentence is kinda wonky, sometimes simple goes a long way so "He was distraught"

3." he reeked of a bar" - i get what you're trying to convey but again, "he reeked of cheap beer" makes it better.

4. " they look like a homeless man’s everyday wear."- once again, the sentence is a little clunky. Go with, "He looked like a hobo out of a crackhouse."

5. "He looked terrible in all."- the way the sentence is structured, "in all" isn't really needed but if you do want to include it, you could go with, "All in all, he looked terrible."

6. " but a person who has a problem with talking to people who stink like a skank from a bar on a Saturday Night. So it made me tense when this male approached me, and when he opened his mouth."- okay so first of all, the first sentence is absolutely hilarious, it works, it's worded well.
but the same problem crops up in the second sentence, the use of "male" in regular narration like this is very out of place. just go with "So it made me tense when he approached me"

7. "or anyone else in fact with that type of breath."- this part of the dialogue is unnecessary.

8." I scooted away in irritation with the smell of him."- 'from the smell.' thats all thats needed.

9. you seem to repeat some phrases over and over like, 'stinky skank breath', unless anything is a character's catchphrase you should just use different words each time or not describe it every time.

10."Aren’t all women different? I don’t get men."- as this is the character's inner monologue, put a dialogue tag after it.

I mean, i like where the story is going but it needs a lot of proofreading and editing, the main problem would be sentence structuring and the only way to get good at it is practice so i suggest you keep writing a lot and you'll start noticing your errors immediately.

Anyhow, good story, i'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Wow...I loved it!!!