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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Ilna - Chapter 2

    hello and happy review day! let's get to reviewing :D just have to say i did accidentally skip chapter one, so if i say something incredulously idiotic, that may be ...

    Aug 1
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The death of Ava

    hello! i remember reviewing your other story, so i was thrilled to read this one as well! let's jump right in :D this piece felt really eerie... i'm mostly curious ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Four - Chapter One

    hello! i have to mention i personally love when a story takes place in a coastal city, but i might be biased because i live in one... anyway, let's get ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Chapter One - Unnamed LMS VII Novel

    hello looseleaf! this first chapter seems almost a bit... domestic, so i'm excited to see where it goes from here! i ought to preface this by saying i haven't read ...

    Aug 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A God Named Sin | Senior Project - 1

    hello savageraptor! this is a really intriguing piece, and one i've been meaning to review for forever! i love the two worlds you've built. i think you do a good ...

    Jul 12
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Promise

    hello gina! and welcome to YWS! i really liked this piece, and it left me with so many questions! like how old is the narrator? how and when did their ...

    Jul 4
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Aethel: Part I

    hey kivaya! this feels quite different from your amber story, so i was pleasantly surprised! i especially like the worldbuilding, and from what i’ve read it really feels like you’ve ...

    Jun 29
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: Ilna - Prologue

    hello! i saw you posted a chapter one, so i had to go check out the prologue first :) i really liked this piece. especially the line "two bright green ...

    Jun 23
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Sharp as Steel -- Chapter One

    hmm, i have a pretty limited knowledge about the fae. i did read 'these hollow vows' by lexi ryan and had a great time, but that was a while ago ...

    Jun 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Amber (Chapters 1-2)

    this seems like a really cool story so far, i'm definitely interested to see where this goes. honestly my first impression of Finn was that he seemed a bit self-centered ...

    Jun 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 2

    hello darlet! i really liked this follow up, but i am slightly confused on what happened between this chapter and the first one. though, i'm sure this can be clarified ...

    Jun 8
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Prologue: Do I Even Matter

    hey there LayLay! i haven't reviewed any of your other works so this is my first impression of your writing, and i liked it a lot : ) i like ...

    Jun 4
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Anastasia’s origin: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate

    can rat tails bend unnaturally? i always pictured them kind of like noodles, flexible in all directions... though, surely the rat must have had more injures than a broken tail ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: Tale of the flowers

    hello! this piece feels really cozy, especially the beginning. the light creating a warmth and gigi enjoying some peaceful sleep work together to create a very nice atmosphere. though, the ...

    May 30
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Is Nihilism a product of comfort rather than suffering?

    700 wives? damn... also, it's a bit ironic for Solomon to say 'love your spouse' when he had 700 of them, isn't it? though that's just one girl's opinion. and ...

    May 30


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