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Re: Ilna - Chapter 2
hello and happy review day! let's get to reviewing :D just have to say i did accidentally skip chapter one, so if i say something incredulously idiotic, that may be ...
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Re: The death of Ava
hello! i remember reviewing your other story, so i was thrilled to read this one as well! let's jump right in :D this piece felt really eerie... i'm mostly curious ...
Aug 1 -
Re: The Four - Chapter One
hello! i have to mention i personally love when a story takes place in a coastal city, but i might be biased because i live in one... anyway, let's get ...
Aug 1 -
Re: Chapter One - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
hello looseleaf! this first chapter seems almost a bit... domestic, so i'm excited to see where it goes from here! i ought to preface this by saying i haven't read ...
Aug 1 -
Re: A God Named Sin | Senior Project - 1
hello savageraptor! this is a really intriguing piece, and one i've been meaning to review for forever! i love the two worlds you've built. i think you do a good ...
Jul 12 -
Re: Promise
hello gina! and welcome to YWS! i really liked this piece, and it left me with so many questions! like how old is the narrator? how and when did their ...
Jul 4 -
Re: Aethel: Part I
hey kivaya! this feels quite different from your amber story, so i was pleasantly surprised! i especially like the worldbuilding, and from what i’ve read it really feels like you’ve ...
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Re: Ilna - Prologue
hello! i saw you posted a chapter one, so i had to go check out the prologue first :) i really liked this piece. especially the line "two bright green ...
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Re: Sharp as Steel -- Chapter One
hmm, i have a pretty limited knowledge about the fae. i did read 'these hollow vows' by lexi ryan and had a great time, but that was a while ago ...
Jun 9 -
Re: Amber (Chapters 1-2)
this seems like a really cool story so far, i'm definitely interested to see where this goes. honestly my first impression of Finn was that he seemed a bit self-centered ...
Jun 9 -
Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 2
hello darlet! i really liked this follow up, but i am slightly confused on what happened between this chapter and the first one. though, i'm sure this can be clarified ...
Jun 8 -
Re: Prologue: Do I Even Matter
hey there LayLay! i haven't reviewed any of your other works so this is my first impression of your writing, and i liked it a lot : ) i like ...
Jun 4 -
Re: Anastasia’s origin: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate
can rat tails bend unnaturally? i always pictured them kind of like noodles, flexible in all directions... though, surely the rat must have had more injures than a broken tail ...
May 30 -
Re: Tale of the flowers
hello! this piece feels really cozy, especially the beginning. the light creating a warmth and gigi enjoying some peaceful sleep work together to create a very nice atmosphere. though, the ...
May 30 -
Re: Is Nihilism a product of comfort rather than suffering?
700 wives? damn... also, it's a bit ironic for Solomon to say 'love your spouse' when he had 700 of them, isn't it? though that's just one girl's opinion. and ...
May 30
