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Re: Wildflower
Hello oceans! Lovely poem you have here (and I love your username :) )! I haven’t reviewed in a while, so apologies if this is a little rusty/feel free to ...
Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34
Back again! This chapter is definitely different from the previous ones I've read, because we get a more dialogue heavy section in comparison to the mostly descriptive chapters in the ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 33
Hello again! So, wow! I really dig the ending here, because I'm intrigued with how she is going to interact with the dragon. I really like how you led up ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 32
Hey there! I want to apologize in advance because I haven’t been consistently following this novel, but hopefully this review can still be helpful! c: The imagery you have throughout ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Mother Nature (Poem)
Hello there! Mind if a drop a review here? Coincidentally enough, it's Earth Day today so it's actually pretty fitting that I'm reading this (happy Earth Day!). Anyway, let's get ...
Apr 22, 2020 -
Re: No More Noises
Hey there! I interpreted this poem as someone struggling with their identity/individuality. It felt like the speaker was coming to the realization that they only need support when they are ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: rain rain go away
Hello Anamel! Thought I’d drop by and talk about your poem for a bit! To me, this poem represented two people split between the idea of an afterlife/heaven vs. there ...
Feb 19, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 30
Hello there! While I haven't read any of the previous installments, just this whole idea of kelpies really intrigued me from the beginning of this chapter. I don't think I've ...
Jan 29, 2020 -
Re: (Untitled)
Hello there! Clearly the bond between the main character and the dog is very tight, and you delivered that message pretty well. Midnight seems like a loyal sidekick and it ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: My Essay on the North Sentinelese (w/ bibliography)
Hello! I really liked this piece, because I wasn’t previously knowledgeable of this tribe and it was nice to educate myself! You did a good job of setting the tone ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: My Wish
Hello there! So I thought the description of this work that you gave was interesting - you mentioned "discovering yourself" necessary prior to making a change - however, I feel ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: dream-talk
Hey alliyah! This is a lot to unpack, but I really want to try and take a stab at it; the writing really just stood out to me and I ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: Who Said
Hello! So I have to say that I love the meaning behind this poem! The message is conveyed very easily to me (as a reader) and I feel like this ...
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: Snowy Owl
Hello! Mind if I drop in for a review? So I liked the general concept of this — you’ve got a nice idea of what you want to write about, ...
Jan 6, 2020 -
Re: When I Was Anna - 21
Hey Carlito! I apologize since I haven’t read any of the previous chapters, but I saw this in the green room and felt like reviewing it (and it always piqued ...
Jan 5, 2020
