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  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Wildflower

    Hello oceans! Lovely poem you have here (and I love your username :) )! I haven’t reviewed in a while, so apologies if this is a little rusty/feel free to ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34

    Back again! This chapter is definitely different from the previous ones I've read, because we get a more dialogue heavy section in comparison to the mostly descriptive chapters in the ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 33

    Hello again! So, wow! I really dig the ending here, because I'm intrigued with how she is going to interact with the dragon. I really like how you led up ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 32

    Hey there! I want to apologize in advance because I haven’t been consistently following this novel, but hopefully this review can still be helpful! c: The imagery you have throughout ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Mother Nature (Poem)

    Hello there! Mind if a drop a review here? Coincidentally enough, it's Earth Day today so it's actually pretty fitting that I'm reading this (happy Earth Day!). Anyway, let's get ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Noises

    Hey there! I interpreted this poem as someone struggling with their identity/individuality. It felt like the speaker was coming to the realization that they only need support when they are ...

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: rain rain go away

    Hello Anamel! Thought I’d drop by and talk about your poem for a bit! To me, this poem represented two people split between the idea of an afterlife/heaven vs. there ...

    Feb 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 30

    Hello there! While I haven't read any of the previous installments, just this whole idea of kelpies really intrigued me from the beginning of this chapter. I don't think I've ...

    Jan 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Health Re: (Untitled)

    Hello there! Clearly the bond between the main character and the dog is very tight, and you delivered that message pretty well. Midnight seems like a loyal sidekick and it ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Essay on the North Sentinelese (w/ bibliography)

    Hello! I really liked this piece, because I wasn’t previously knowledgeable of this tribe and it was nice to educate myself! You did a good job of setting the tone ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Art » Realistic, Politics Re: My Wish

    Hello there! So I thought the description of this work that you gave was interesting - you mentioned "discovering yourself" necessary prior to making a change - however, I feel ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: dream-talk

    Hey alliyah! This is a lot to unpack, but I really want to try and take a stab at it; the writing really just stood out to me and I ...

    Jan 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who Said

    Hello! So I have to say that I love the meaning behind this poem! The message is conveyed very easily to me (as a reader) and I feel like this ...

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Theatre Re: Snowy Owl

    Hello! Mind if I drop in for a review? So I liked the general concept of this — you’ve got a nice idea of what you want to write about, ...

    Jan 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: When I Was Anna - 21

    Hey Carlito! I apologize since I haven’t read any of the previous chapters, but I saw this in the green room and felt like reviewing it (and it always piqued ...

    Jan 5, 2020


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