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  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Wildflower

    Hello oceans! Lovely poem you have here (and I love your username :) )! I haven’t reviewed in a while, so apologies if this is a little rusty/feel free to ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34

    Back again! This chapter is definitely different from the previous ones I've read, because we get a more dialogue heavy section in comparison to the mostly descriptive chapters in the ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 33

    Hello again! So, wow! I really dig the ending here, because I'm intrigued with how she is going to interact with the dragon. I really like how you led up ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 32

    Hey there! I want to apologize in advance because I haven’t been consistently following this novel, but hopefully this review can still be helpful! c: The imagery you have throughout ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Mother Nature (Poem)

    Hello there! Mind if a drop a review here? Coincidentally enough, it's Earth Day today so it's actually pretty fitting that I'm reading this (happy Earth Day!). Anyway, let's get ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Noises

    Hey there! I interpreted this poem as someone struggling with their identity/individuality. It felt like the speaker was coming to the realization that they only need support when they are ...

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: rain rain go away

    Hello Anamel! Thought I’d drop by and talk about your poem for a bit! To me, this poem represented two people split between the idea of an afterlife/heaven vs. there ...

    Feb 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 30

    Hello there! While I haven't read any of the previous installments, just this whole idea of kelpies really intrigued me from the beginning of this chapter. I don't think I've ...

    Jan 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Health Re: (Untitled)

    Hello there! Clearly the bond between the main character and the dog is very tight, and you delivered that message pretty well. Midnight seems like a loyal sidekick and it ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Essay on the North Sentinelese (w/ bibliography)

    Hello! I really liked this piece, because I wasn’t previously knowledgeable of this tribe and it was nice to educate myself! You did a good job of setting the tone ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Art » Realistic, Politics Re: My Wish

    Hello there! So I thought the description of this work that you gave was interesting - you mentioned "discovering yourself" necessary prior to making a change - however, I feel ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: dream-talk

    Hey alliyah! This is a lot to unpack, but I really want to try and take a stab at it; the writing really just stood out to me and I ...

    Jan 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who Said

    Hello! So I have to say that I love the meaning behind this poem! The message is conveyed very easily to me (as a reader) and I feel like this ...

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Theatre Re: Snowy Owl

    Hello! Mind if I drop in for a review? So I liked the general concept of this — you’ve got a nice idea of what you want to write about, ...

    Jan 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: When I Was Anna - 21

    Hey Carlito! I apologize since I haven’t read any of the previous chapters, but I saw this in the green room and felt like reviewing it (and it always piqued ...

    Jan 5, 2020


The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone