nayex

Hi, i liked the poem, although it seemed longer than needed. I usually like simplicity, so that may be it. I loved the rhyming, i can't rhyme for shit. I ...

Your a good writer, i can see that, but for some reason the whole idea didn't really interest me, but that's just me, not you. my favorite part was though ...

I really like this, the whole idea of it. Sometimes it became to wordy, but your imagery is quite wonderful. I let my fingers, like carnivorous spiders, come to know ...

i like it, its really simple, but it makes its point, the beginning has a good flow i'm not too fond of this though. Please go on without me, I ...

Welcome! ^.^ so your first post? lemme try to help you. I fell in his arms, He smiles, My heart pounds, The smell of love was in the air, Was ...

i really feel the emotion, as for review I'm not good with punctuation, but i can say i really enjoyed this line And so does my soul, it becomes bruised ...

Welcome! ^.^ i like how you started your poem, but the rhyming of it was annoying, too childish maybe? i never like anything that repeats either >< but that's just ...

Over the years I've counted, my loses and I've lost my will. started off nicely. I refuse to fight over something that's right, so I just leave my suffering with ...

fill your eyes with open sky. i’ve looked at these stars a million times, but never with you. these same lights that might have flickered into darkness years and years ...

i liked your poem very much, the only think i didn't like was how you separated your lines. it was a bit confusing and takes the illusion away. Of course ...