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Re: The Reason We Love
Hi there, ElvenJedi! I actually really enjoyed this poem, at a first glance, I was a bit thrown by the centered text, but I can appreciate the stylistic decision. It ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: Them Blues
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Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: Honey Balm [Sugar Sweet Tears #6]
Hi there! Nadair, dropping in for a review. So I actually really liked this! I was a bit thrown by the title to be completely honest, but now (obviously) it ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: His Trap
Hey hermione315, nadair here! God, do I love a good haiku, let a lone three haiku to create one lasting poem! I truly love the line "sticky amber lies within ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Deleted 57
Hi Lumi! I actually love this poem because nothing quite fully describes how difficult it is to move on. I feel like it was a smart stylistic choice to go ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Terrible Beauty
QueenAnne I like this poem, actually. Which is a surprise for me, because I'm usually more for happy/lovey/reminiscent poetry. I like the short abruptness of some of the imagery, and ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Juliet
Nicholas here for a review! I really didn't think I was going to enjoy this, because I myself am a man of few words (poetry). However, once I found myself ...
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 20
Though I typically don't enjoy reading work of this length, as I am too much of a poetry nerd myself, I was extremely biased as I started to read this ...
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: Trees Loom On
I liked the overall concept of this poem, and I thought that the topic was well chosen and well written, but the layout through me off a little bit. I ...
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: Possible Prologue
Hey, Nick here for a review! I really do love the feel this has when I read it aloud, however there are a few nitpicks I would change if this ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Ode To My Significant Other
Nick here to write a review! At first I thought this was just going to be another short love poem. It is indeed love poetry but it is in no ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Bilingual
This is one of those poems that could stick with you for days. The thought of blood and blades being a language, thus making the speaker bilingual in a sense. ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: The Evil Pimple
I really liked this poem. Aside from the small grammatic errors (which in no way detract from the meaning of the poem), some of the phrasing seems forced. The third ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: The World Danced By
Nick here to review: This poem will probably stay in my mind for a little, as the seem less use of metaphor worked beautifully. I did take not to the ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: What Are We Missing?
I LOVE THE WAY THIS IS SET UP. LOVE. So I also love the topic, why children are better than adults, or at least have better qualities. I'm quite curious ...
Dec 30, 2014
