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Re: Circus Monster: Prologue
Saving, pah. No one wants saving. They want freedom. Freedom from all the prejudices, humiliation, pain, sadness, tears, and loathing that they've experienced. It's true that for the beautiful snake-c
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: .
Hmm.. so how does this poem start? I think that the speaker is in his bed, like what Jackie_Perez09 said. The first lines are catchy, unique, yes, and it triggers ...
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: A Dream About A Girl
Sadness. It's the first thing that I noticed here, TheDreamWriter. Yeah, it's a bit of a cliche, with a different twist though.. they had a great time together in their ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Mommy-o and Mommy-ette
Short, dark, and CUTE! So Mommy-ette and Mommy-o can't eat a burrito in the department store, ne? (it's how it is in the Philippines-you can't eat or drink inside a ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Montezuma's Revenge
Short but funny, MargoSeuss. I laughed at this the other night so my sister has to ask me why I was laughing like mad! So dispenser = tissue, words = ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: To Catch Time
Keeping time, time, time, in a sort of Runic rhyme. (oops, it's The Bells of Edgar Allan Poe!) True, time flies so fast. Silence, too. It's one of the poems ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Dear Parents
Hi artybirdy! *waves* I hope I can make this kind of work as you are, pity I lack skills *sighs*. Anyway, your work reveals the hidden feelings and pleas of ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Heart of Gold
Pure hearts are greater than gold. It shines, not only physically, but in everything a pure-hearted person does. It's amazing that even though there are challenges, problems, and pain in ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Why did you?
"Why?" It's one of the most painful and surprising questions I know. Why? Because the answer can be unexpected. The answer can make you or break you. It sucks that ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: A Locked Drawer
I could totally relate with the poem. How come people only look at the way a person appears to them on the outside? How come they are contented with the ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Blue Tank Top
Sad. And bittersweet. It's a poem about disappointment and pain (I think) because of lies and separation. It stings and the tank top is not just an object or a ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: Lovely Story 1
Short and sweet. Umm.. it reminds me of a certain anime( it was Ao Haru Ride, I think) but it captures the time when love at first sight was not ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 1 *
Kyaaaa! Damn, it nearly made me cry, tigeraye! Toby-was that his name?- is sick, and he's having more attacks than what a child should have! What if he suddenly collapsed ...
Nov 28, 2015
