myjaspercat

thank you for your review. As for the 'he' being vague, well, I wanted that. I was looking for a piece where it's kind of like a 'story' told from ...

thank you, and sometimes I don't realize I made a mistake so that's why I post it. I am glad you liked it, plus I thought that a long prologue ...

thank you for the review. I had been asked if I could take one of my stories and make them into a series of poems, so that is exactly what ...

thank you, and I hope that the plot stands out more later on. If not then, I will try to make it more clear in my next revision. again, thank ...

of course, that is why I am here

thank you for the advice, I really appreciate it

thank you for your review

your welcome

thank you for that, I am glad that you liked it. My English teacher said that I should submit this, so I here to find all of you guy's opinions ...

of course, glad I could help.

of course, glad I could help.

of course, I would be glad to review it for you. I'll be looking out to see when it is time :)

thank you, and yeah I thought that there was going to be a lot of errors. The author note in chapter one explained that I wrote this back in 2009 ...

I understand your points but I still think that this needs work, and what I told you in my review will help. Sorry to be rude, but if you want ...

Review ticket. Message me if you want me to review this. Next time brake this up into smaller sections so it isn't hard to read in one sitting.