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myjaspercat

  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: sooner than later (happy birthday, darling boy)

    Note: This review has been deleted
    Forgot to hit the review button. Smh.

    Mar 26, 2026
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 14

    Thank you for the review!! I actually find it funny that you're one of the first people to actually bring up the cliche's following werewolf stories. Infact I originally started ...

    Jun 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 3

    This story is definitely going to be a first-person multiple point of view. I hadn't initially thought of writing from Veronica's point of view but I defiantly can at some ...

    Aug 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: The Night I Committed Suicide

    thank you for the review! I'm glad you were able to enjoy the piece. I will definitely take your suggestions into consideration and I appreciate you taking the time to ...

    Dec 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Within My Blood (Chapter 7)

    the Wolffs Motel is owned by the family and yes Jasper is apart of it. The reader is supposed to make these connections a little sooner through the help of ...

    Jun 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: Within my Blood (Chapter 4-part 2)

    Amelia is around 12 years of age. As an idea I picture Lazarus and ellie to be mid-forties to early fifties and their oldest son to be about 26 or ...

    Jun 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Within my Blood (Chapter 6)

    Thank you so much for your reviews!! No you didn't miss anything. Chapter 5 currently does not exist in my world, rip. I've rewrote it so many times I decided ...

    Jun 21, 2020
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Missing Shoes!!!

    Ahhh ok that%u2019s very interesting!! Thank you for clearing that up.

    Jun 4, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: The Real Zombies

    Ok awesome thank you for that clarification! And I%u2019m glad you found the review help. I%u2019m always down to help any time feel free to ask

    Jun 1, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Spandex Man

    Of course, I'm happy to help anytime. I really did enjoy the piece too. About the dialogue: Like I mentioned I liked the oddness of the conversation but I personally ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: D&D 1

    Totally not a review but a suggestion: As someone who plays DnD myself I find this very interesting. In fact I've considered writing down my groups adventures. I like this ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Vocie of Lies

    Thank you, I'm glad you liked the piece. And yes, it is written about a real experience.

    Nov 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Searching for my Pop Culture Jesus

    Thank you for your review. In fact, this poem is about a real man I saw walking down the street. I was thinking of doing another one that follows this ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Lost my Voice

    Thank you so much, I'm glad you found a beauty in my piece and were able to relate to it.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: released

    Of course I'm glad to have helped. For the extra spacing issue, have you tried adding a new line with "shift enter"? That typically gets rid of the double spaced ...

    Sep 3, 2018


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