myjaspercat

Hello, and happy Review Day ;> So, first off I want to say that I absolutely love this. I thought it was just epic (that's still a thing right), anyways ...

I liked this, I thought is as cute and somewhat the beginning to a full novel, (if that is what you would want to do with this work.) However, there ...

The first thing I want to say is that your story is cliché. Honestly I didn't even want to finish reading it. The concept of princess is just so overly ...

Wow, I really do like this. I thought that it was beautifully scripted and it was so mature. I absolutely loved it. But as always I must point out a ...

"A Note: I am currently writing this story in several parts. I have divided the first part, which is the only part written so far, into two different sections, which ...

I thought that this was an interesting song. However the beginning doesn't really intrigue me. It seems rather weird and choppy. All together it seems like a poem rather then ...

I like the beginning of your story really well, it makes me kind of smile because I can see were the main character/ narrator *depends on point of view* is ...

Wow, your writing in this piece literally made me want to cry. Over all I thought that this was a very beautiful, very touching story. But like everything I review, ...

Ok, what to say first? I got it, how about that the idea of this is rather cliché. Don't get me wrong, I am not trying to be really mean ...

Overall I liked your poem a lot. However your second stanza "However, every dusk and dawn sailors rendezvous with death they tell themselves that "we are fools!" Kind of confused ...

"It's sad to say that but my life would be a living hell without it." --Take out the 'a' after 'be' because it is unneeded.-- I like how in the ...

I don't know what you are actually trying to aim for here, but as I was reading this I kind of thought of the hunger games. (Sorry if that sounds ...

" In a land, a time, where the wicked and bizarre may not be daily, but usual." --First thing here, take out 'a time' it doesn't fit in and it ...

First of all, I would like to say that I think that this is a great piece of work. Anyways, Reading this I didn't have the felling of reading poetry. ...

I really liked this chapter, I thought that it was well written and had a great intriguing aspect. However there were just a few areas in which I think that ...