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Hello summergrl13, Myjaspercat here for a review... So the first thing I want to say is that you have a really good idea here. I like how you decided to ...

Hello mammad, Myjaspercat here for a review for you... So I really did like the idea behind this poem but it was still really weird. For one I felt like ...

Hey Lazarus89, Myjaspercat here for her final review for this story... Before I begin, I want to say that I really think this story has potential, regardless of what I ...

Hello Lazarus89, Myjaspercat here... So, again I know that this isn't technically in the green room anymore but I want to review this as well before I move on to ...

Hello Chaser, Myjaspercat here for a review for you... I'm going to skip chapter three for now, if you would like me to go over it later feel free to ...

Hello again Chaser, Myjaspercat here for another review... like I said in chapter 1 I want to go through from the beginning so I get the full story. Now I ...

Hello Chaser, Myjaspercat here for a review... I know it's been awhile since this was in the green room but I want to review the piece that is so I ...

Hello fantasydragon01, Myjaspercat here to review... So I kind of wanted to read and review part one first but I couldn't find a link to it so, if I mention ...

Hey Lazarus89, Myjaspercat here for a review on review day.... I know that this isn't technically in the green room anymore, but I want to review the other two parts ...

Hey DangerousOverlord, Myjaspercat here for a review... A wispy path of smoke weaved through the trees, cutting through the pine forest. --ok, so one small problem with this sentence... by ...

Hello NicolMemo, Myjaspercat here for a review... Alright, well my first impression of the prologue (since that comes first) was that it was to damn short. (Excuse my language). The ...

Hello sponde25, Myjaspercat here for a review... Ok, lets begin with the whole 'love poetry is cliché thing' since by reading this I have assumed it is (or the style ...

Hello GSum, Myjaspercat here for a pre-review day review... So my overall thoughts about this was 'wow this is short'. Now I know that it is ok for a poem ...

Hello TheSilentBagpipe, Myjaspercat here for a review... 1.) "Music leaves upon everything a mark. " ---Alright, now your title of the poem is 'The Mark Of Music' so instead of ...

Hello tanny070395, Myjaspercat here for a review... Ok, so my first thoughts on this was that it seems to short. Now I get it is a short story, but sometimes ...