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Hey there GeneviveKate, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review on this piece of work. Nitpicks They are the reason my heart beats out of control, but also why it's ...

Hey there Clarity, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Lips sewn, silence I like this line but I also don't like this line. If that makes any sense. I ...

Hey there Shikora, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review... Nit-Picks Falling Rain In all the world For this line, I would have some sort of punctuation and/or connecting word ...

Hey there Eros, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Nit-Picks Wondering about the past, I was lying there on the bed, Lost in the thoughts, Accompanied by a constant ...

Hey there Dani965, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. First of all I wanted to say good job, I really liked this poem which is kind of rare for ...

Hey there Bloodlord, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. 1) Line-by-Line/Nit-Picks Once had the wind This is more of a personal preference, but I would switch the places of ...

Hey there slurringsugars, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Taping over your mouth would be better Then the words you say that seep out I would add a comma ...

Hey there Snazzy, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review on such a wonderful day. 1)Nit-picks/Line-by-Line I am from “who knows where” I personally would add a comma here. from ...

Hey there toxicunicorn, Myjaspercat, here to leave you a short review. First of all, I do like this piece an I personally think that it's cute. However, that said there ...

Hey there Shootingmoons, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. 1)Line-by-line/Nit-picks All the students knew what was happening today. They couldn't hide, could't you accidently misspelled 'couldn'

Hey there Liminality, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. 1) Style, Punctuation and Formatting So, the first thing I want to point out here is the fact that you ...

Hey there birk, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review First of all I would love to say that I found this poem to be very beautifully written. I love ...

Hey there Chaser, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. First of all, in the description of your piece you told us that the poem could be read both horizontally ...

Hey there Rosette, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review on your piece. So normally I would write a line-by-line for the piece, but I feel like yours doesn't really ...

Hey there Jevan13, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review... I feel worthless, and about this I won't lie, [For rhythmic purposes, I would cut this sentence off here and ...