Heya Dani! Cat here to review your poem! I'll start by going stanza-by-stanza(every 4 lines according to your note), so let's get going!
I really like the first stanza already; I can really relate as a book lover myself. There is already a few good descriptions here, but I would love more sensory details and descriptions. Just a little bit of a push to take it to a whole new level. c:
Second stanza is also very pretty, but I'm a bit confused on what 'set free of her cages' means? Cages of responsibility? The real world? It's a wide answer response open ended question. I relate to the 'lost in the pages' part so much though! I do wish there was just a little more expansion to this stanza.
Third stanza is very very nice. I still wish there was a little bit more to this again.
Final stanza does a pretty good job of wrapping up the poem. It kinda makes it feel rushed though? Like she's finishing the book but just a minute ago she was starting it.
Overall, it is a pretty poem with a nice rhyme throughout. Through the whole thing, I felt like I wanted more? I would love some more elaborate descriptions and details. Line breaks are nice to read and visually pleasing too.
Overall, I really enjoyed this! It was a very nice poem with a lot of potential. I would love to read more poems like this!
Keep writing! =^-^=
~Cat
Points: 1846
Reviews: 102
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