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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    Haha, this is not a sad poem as you put it! I actually find it a bit amusing. And... A bit longing at the same time and I think that's ...

    Jan 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Lovesick is a Disease

    This poem, wow, like DEFINES my thoughts 24/7 pretty much. I adore this poem because it's almost like you wrote it at me, for me. I didn't see any grammar ...

    Jan 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: The light in my eyes

    Hello! Music here for a review! May I say, cool concept cool message! I felt some emotion in this some longing. That's what you need when you really want to ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A New Year's Kiss

    Happy New Year to you as well! Music here for a review. When I saw this title and it's genre, I knew I was in for a treat. Partly, because ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Be The Change

    Wow, this was neat! First of all, I am so jealous of the trip/retreat you took, that sounds like something everyone should do at least once. I like the topic ...

    Dec 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Trust

    Hey there! Music here for a review. Firstly, fabulous job! This was a deep, relatable piece I felt connected with. I think most of us strive for that in our ...

    Dec 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Pine Shelter Building.

    Hey there! Music here for a review. If you've seen my portfolio at all, I've only got two stories. And they're not that creative. So basically, I envy you of ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Bird-watching in the midnight sun

    Hey there! Music here for a review. This was one of the most beautifully written things I've ever come across! Please, teach me how to write like this! I really ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Your Eyes

    Hi there! Music here for a review. First of all, dang! I love this poem to pieces! It's really cute but super deep at the same point. Also of course, ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: If only

    Hi there! Music here for a review. In general, I loved these lyrics so much!! I loved the topic, and the meaning of your song! I was also relatable to ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Together forever

    Hello there! Music here for a review. Firstly, this was a nice and beautiful piece! While I do have some suggestions, I can't forget to praise your wonderful work! So ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Spiritual Re: Brains

    Interesting, different. The one thing that jumps out at me about this poem is that anyone (in my opinion) can relate to it. We've all had those random days and ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    Incredible. I could stop here but I won't. Honestly though, this was well done, well done! The mood you created here was very unique me that ending line of yours ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: So...

    Wow, wow, wow, wow. *claps slowly* This was incredible! I lived in this poem while I read it. I enjoyed it so much because of the relatable factor of it. ...

    Nov 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Truly Unforgiven

    Hi!! Wow, what a neat poem! And your poetry is definitely no crappy!! I love this so much because I can relate to it very, very well. If you read ...

    Nov 21, 2014


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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