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Re: If You Were a Letter
Ms qaralynn, have been a great fan of your work and absolutely like the way this one in particular has panned out (even though I might have been a little ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Technology at Its Sweetest Consequence
Hello Joy! Apologies for my late arrival in reviewing this essay of yours. I've been missing in action for a while but I'm back now and hopefully I should be ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Reflections about the Reflector
Hey Hamza! The subject of a mirror is something that you can play around with quite a bit. You've taken into account a lot of perspectives regarding the use of ...
Apr 27, 2013 -
Re: A Lost Soul
Hey Birds :) First Impressions This is a lovely piece you've got here. I appreciate the way you've framed each line in each stanza perfectly and appropriately in its respective ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Breaking Free: Prologue
Hi qara-pie! 8D So I'm sure I've read this chapter a while back, but never really got to review it. And now that I have all your chapters, I can ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: A Lion in the Room
Hey, Terracotta! This is one very interesting piece. So let's get down to the review! I'll do it paragraph-wise so that I can pin-point those spots of concern. 1st Paragraph ...
Jun 16, 2012 -
Re: A Quest You Almost Completed
Hey, Heather! So here I am for another review! First Stanza This stanza is a little boring, to be honest. Yes, it's got that wonder and intrigue about childhood memories ...
Jun 15, 2012 -
Re: Deleted 28
Hey, Lumeh! Let's get straight to the review. First Impressions The first line of the poem gives it all away, really. I could automatically sense a poem about bonds and ...
Jun 15, 2012 -
Re: Hercules: The Age of Heroes
Hi Heather! So my first impression of this piece is that it borders towards being interesting at first, but then goes on to sound like a bit of a ramble. ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Dragon
Hey, Karzy! This is a brilliant piece. The point of view, the story, the slight grief and oh God, the rhyme. They all blend in so seamlessly. This is almost ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Where the Phoenix Lays her Eggs
Hey, Heather! So. This poem took me a while and then some to actually figure out. Or maybe I haven't fully cracked it yet. xD Nevertheless, the first thing that ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 4
Hey, Ahmad! Back again to review #4! Alright, I think I get the flow of the story easily now. You've tried to give as much exposure as possible in each ...
Jun 8, 2012 -
Re: A Detective Worth Your Money
Hey, Trav! This was a refreshing piece to read and I enjoyed it. Your play with words is nice and the flow goes along quite smoothly. I'm already a fan ...
Jun 6, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 3
Hey, Ahmad! So on with the review! Firstly, I like Liam's chapters. It's distinguishable from Mustafa's and is just really well written and thought of with the character's personality and ...
Jun 6, 2012 -
Re: The Shadow Man
Hey, Beckeh! This thriller is a brilliant read. Especially if someone is looking for something exciting to read in a quicky. What I like about this story is how you ...
Jun 5, 2012
