misstoria

I really enjoyed this poem. The unique format gives you the perception that the narrator is someone who is speaking to the subjects mind. I enjoyed the truth and the ...

As she walks by you, you notice her beauty. You notice her smile, her stance, her grace. She looks invincible, strong, and pure. Her smile shines for miles and miles. ...

I absolutely love this poem! This is a really unique poem and I love it. If I could find the brightest morning, I would keep it in a bottle So ...

Your olive skin as soft as the waves rolling to the shore, Your deep green eyes beckon me in, Deadlier than a cold stare from Medusa. I love this stanza!! ...

I really loved your poem, but I added a few suggestions and comments. Keep writing! Culprit Ecstatic, she leaps from the pyre of her maker I like this line and ...

I quite liked this, but there were a few issues. First of all poetry needs punctuation now like stories. Even if you how it reads others don't. I very much ...

This is an amazing piece of poetry. Void, empty, hollow inside My dreams have fled, my hopes have died Existence has no reason Life's just passing with each season This ...

I really love this! The emotions are very raw in this poem. It seems like this poem can relate to a variety of people. This was my favorite part: He ...

I thought this was pretty good. The emotions are really strong, and it has a lot of feeling, but the punctuation is off. Lost him, Lost a friend, Made me ...

I really liked this poem, but i fell it needs a complete of tweaks I can’t believe you think it works like that, You want to play it like that? ...

Absolutely loved this!! At first the hap hazard style threw me off, but then I got it. The main-character seemed cocky, which really made this interesting. When the character admitted ...

I really liked this piece, but I have a few nit-picks. She's gone. She has already moved to Los Angeles and left me here, alone. I will never see her ...

I adored the story to this poem, but the flow was really off. I also felt like it was less like a poem and more like someone talking to themselves. ...

I really liked the plot to this, but the details were slightly confused. I also agree with housecat when she says it should be more realistic. The speaker mentions that ...

I loved this! The emotion and inner confusion really came out at the beginning, and it really worked. I also liked that both of the male characters in this piece ...