michaelloffet

Well, this was interesting. To be honest I didn't have much clue as to what was going on. I'm getting the idea that it was the sneezes of three old ...

Great start, I love your opening. It gives us a clear explanation as to who this shadow is without revealing too much. We can tell that this character is a ...

Great poem really does sum up what the end of the year is to many people. I appreciate the positive theme telling people not to dwell on the past and ...

A good start. However I did not really no what was going on, sometimes you tried to make it rhyme others it was like you just gave up. This ruins ...

What a great poem, it really helps the reader to feel for Dracula. However one thing that I would change is you need to add capital I's mid sentence. That ...

Good story, however it felt as if everything started a little quick. Also would there have not been any cctv on the train so that you could find out who ...

Great start, with a depressing opening like that it really sets the tone. Hiwever one thing I would say is that don,t you think it's a little precise when you ...

At the start I would recommend putting 'a' instead of 'the bar' just because the audience will not be familiar with this bar. Also I think that you should make ...

Well, it seems as if three batverse's have collided, the 60's, the Arkham games and a completely new Robot Chickenesque world. (satirical) From when the Jokers first line I could ...

Predator As an avid Batman fan I really enjoyed you work, it felt like a situation that could only happen in the Arkham universe that Rocksteady developed. The way in ...

I think the person you are talking about is Jesus? But in my mind it comes across as Batman in The Dark Knight Rises. The poem has been well thought ...

A great poem, easy to relate with if you have been in this situation (which I have not) one thing I must say is that it seems you know an ...

A great poem, easy to relate with if you have been in this situation (which I have not) one thing I must say is that it seems you know an ...

Great poem, it really does just sum down what happened in the Time of the Doctor. This really made me want to visit past moments of the Eleventh Doctors adventures. ...