michaeld

Thanks! There are twenty-five chapters in all, I just haven't uploaded them all.

This was a great poem for me to end the night with after a great day of reviewing! It definitely drew a smile across my face. I loved how simple ...

Thank you! The only reason I had the "is" on the second line, was since these are haikus, the only way I could get that line to have seven syllables ...

Thank you!

Ahh! thank you so much sarah! :) This review meant alot :3

I thought it was pretty good! One of the only things that I found wrong with this, was that you used the word "sware" incorrectly. It is actually a word, ...

I was actually thinking about doing that :)

This was actually pretty good! I liked the jumpy-ness of it at the beginning, but then towards the end, it mellows out into a smooth rhythm :) I like it! ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! I actually have to read it to the class tomorrow as with my other poem called "Waxen Mason Jars"! Once again, thank you so much for the kind ...

This was really touching and the imagery was just beautiful. When you talked about counting the cars on the trains, I could really see a train rushing by while one ...

This was really beautiful! I loved the way you used dialogue at the beginning of each stanza. The whole thing flowed really well and your word choice was perfect; not ...

Thank you so much! If I were to write something like this again, where would I submit it on the site?

Thank you so much for this review! It definitely makes me feel better about my writing!

Thank you so much everyone for your helpful reviews! I definitely need to work on this, and just my poetry in general! Thanks again! These are definitely the reviews that ...