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Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
You have to get Breaking Dawn now! That was my favorite one. These books rock!
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Dorothy's Diner
Hi! I just decided to do some comments today on some stories. Are you planning on adding to this? If so, it needs a plot. Now, I'm not at all ...
Feb 20, 2009 -
Re: For The Girls: Chapter Two Continued
This was really good! I want to know what happened so PM me if you add more. I'm not in the mood to really review it now but please continue ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: One Last Chance
You can totally make something out of this. Lukas remind me of someone in one of my stories, but that person was alive. So anyways, you can make something out ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 4
I'm really tired right I will probably review this later. But It's really good! Okay? Just had to make sure you knew that! Okay, I'll review this later, pinky swear.
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Without You. *Edited.*
I know I made some random mistakes because I was deleting stuff and then I was adding things. So I forgot some words that I should've deleted. Thanks for the ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Piano Lessons
I really liked this. I just wanted to know the boys name. It was really good, keep it up! If you continue it PM me.
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Positive (3) edited slightly different.
Thanks for the review I'll fix some things and try to make it more realistic. Thanks for the help :)
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: What a Gymnast!
Oh my gosh! I loved this! I'm in gymnastics and I love when people write about it and stuff and admire it because it is such a difficult sport. Awesome ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: .
Honestly it's good. It just needs more depth and more emotion. It's kind of cliche you know? If you add more emotion and power to the lines I think it ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Enna.
Wow this is really good, I can't really find anything to say. Yeah, so I was bored and just looking page after page of the 'other fiction' category and I ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: The Sims and You
ha ha. I play Sims all the time and I totally relate. I get so mad when they take so long to do every little chore. Just for the laugh ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Positive (Edited) about a teen with HIV
Thanks so much. I tried super hard on this story. I'll fix the beginning. It means a lot that you liked it.
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
You're not being to harsh. I like to know how to improve. I might edit and re-post soon so. I don't know for sure.
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Uglies Series
Well, it's funny, I've never read the books but, a friend of mine read all of them and got Extras. I asked her if it was good and she said ...
Jan 27, 2009