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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: .

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    Hello. I am Methrirr123. I will review your essay now. *Sigh* It's internet Atheists like this that try to rip faith from others that make us real life religion tolerant ...

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Shakespearean Sonnet #6 - The Cosmos

    Hello. I am Methrirr. I will now review your poem, if you don't mind. Firstly, I am honored to be the first to review this sonnet. It's really good. It ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Why is she crying?

    Hello. I am Methrirr. I will review your poem now, if you don't mind. I am conflicted by this piece. It started very strong, and built up, and then it ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Senses are Tingling

    Hello. I am Methrirr. I will review your poem now, if you don't mind. I like how you did this. I can see from your use of dashes that you ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Weeping Skies

    Hello. I am Methrirr. I will now review your poem, if you don't mind. It's short, and powerful. It has strength, and depth. I especially like your first line, although ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Other Side of The Ocean -Chapter 1

    Hello. I am Methrirr. I read this chapter, and will now review it, if you don't mind. I had very few problems with this story in the beginning. As far ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How To Fool Innocent People Online?

    ... I... I was innocent... How could you? To think... to think that such directionless malice, that such pure and unmitigated evil plagues this earth, plagues this beautiful internet... I ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: I have Writer's block

    I am Methrirr123, and I'm here to do what I can to help. First things first, I have a problem with this mainly because you're apologizing. You can't apologize for ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: An ideal definition

    Methrirr with your review :) Well, first off, it is my hope that it didn't turn out like this on purpose. It makes it awkward to read as poetry, and ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Change ( prologue )

    Fresh meat... I mean... what? Anyway *clears throat* sorry about that. Methrirr here, with a review. Firstly, and most impactingly I think, is that this prologue is three paragraphs. It's ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    Hello, 15253. I am Methrirr. And I do not frequently review novel chapters written by 13-year-olds. So. To buisness. First things first, I'm gonna quickly tear this thing appart. At ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: These Lives

    Hello. I am Methrirr. Now. To buisness. This poem started out rather weak. In any poem, there are good lines and bad lines. One such line that stood out to ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Last Poem

    Hi there. Methrirr with your review. I'm sorry that you won't be spending any more time on this site. It's always good to have writers around, and one less is ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wake up now.

    Hello Retro. I am Methrirr, though I suppose I'm powerless to stop you from calling me whatever you wish. Know only that I rarely ever do reviews, or even come ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Science Re: Patterns of Light

    Methrirr here to review your poem. The word use in this poem is what really makes it, I think. Your wording itself is kind of wonky, but I love the ...

    Feb 6, 2014


There are those who say that life is like a book, with chapters for each event in your life and a limited number of pages on which you can spend your time. But I prefer to think that a book is like a life, particularly a good one, which is well to worth staying up all night to finish.
— Lemony Snicket