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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Do Not Ask Me To Remember

    Hi! This is a very beautiful poem. I'm sorry about your grandmother's situation, I hope that she fights through it. The lines that really stuck with me were : "Just ...

    Jul 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10

    Hey, Tortwag! Mephis here for a late review (here anyway)! So, I should start out by saying that this review may seem very messy. It's 1 AM in the morning ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    Hey, Stegosaurus! So I actually really liked this poem. This has a certain feeling to it that I can't really grasp, but I love it! Should I call it abstract? ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dream Sequence 4/5

    Hey steampowered! In this short review, I'd like to point out things that are not grammatical errors but things I noticed in the actual writing and storyline. I feel like ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Harry's Godcousin

    Hey Emerald, happy review day! So I think the idea with this fan fiction was actually pretty great. I like the idea of there being someone else besides Harry who ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Part One Edited

    Hey RPP! I gotta say, this was a very interesting piece of work. Full of action and awesome characters. I especially liked Krystal and her dialogues. I would like to ...

    Jul 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Little girl

    Hey! So won't say that this is bad or anything. I respect how people write, what they want to write, and well, everyone has things that they want to work ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Modern Jerks

    Hey, TealElephant! So, I have one small thing to say about this piece of art. Just one small thing. The title was creative and the content was awesome, but I ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Cosmic Eulogy

    Hey, RoyalHighness! So I really liked the content of this, although it felt kind of awkward to read. What I mean is that the line breaks are placed very frequently, ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Diaboli (Red Velvet Chapter 1)

    Hey, again! :D (I hope you don't see me as a creepy stalker by now!) So, this is very interesting. I've never read a story like this before, although that ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Delicate One (Red Velvet Prologue)

    Hey, so we meet again! I was just browsing through your works after the Cinderella story, because I wanted to read more of what you could write. And look what ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Cinderella's Happily Ever Never

    Hello there, bloodybelle01! So this was definitely a very interesting story. Kind of like those 'fairy-tales for adults' type of stories. Of course, this was much more nicer if I ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    Hey Maverick! well o,bviously i dont have any grammar point.outs for you, ha-ha! Nicely done! This poem was highly interesting and I really loved it. To say, I felt mildly ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: Not A Wonderland

    Hey, englishbreakfastgirl! I'd first like to say that this was a very deep and analytical prologue. You have described 'life' in a way that didn't make me confused in any ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Girl Who Became an Island

    Hey, Wasabi! What a good day to write a review! So frankly, I loved this idea. It was so original and kind of childish, almost, like a short fairytale, as ...

    Feb 22, 2015


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