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Re: Do Not Ask Me To Remember
Hi! This is a very beautiful poem. I'm sorry about your grandmother's situation, I hope that she fights through it. The lines that really stuck with me were : "Just ...
Jul 18, 2017 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10
Hey, Tortwag! Mephis here for a late review (here anyway)! So, I should start out by saying that this review may seem very messy. It's 1 AM in the morning ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies
Hey, Stegosaurus! So I actually really liked this poem. This has a certain feeling to it that I can't really grasp, but I love it! Should I call it abstract? ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 4/5
Hey steampowered! In this short review, I'd like to point out things that are not grammatical errors but things I noticed in the actual writing and storyline. I feel like ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Harry's Godcousin
Hey Emerald, happy review day! So I think the idea with this fan fiction was actually pretty great. I like the idea of there being someone else besides Harry who ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Part One Edited
Hey RPP! I gotta say, this was a very interesting piece of work. Full of action and awesome characters. I especially liked Krystal and her dialogues. I would like to ...
Jul 25, 2015 -
Re: Little girl
Hey! So won't say that this is bad or anything. I respect how people write, what they want to write, and well, everyone has things that they want to work ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: Modern Jerks
Hey, TealElephant! So, I have one small thing to say about this piece of art. Just one small thing. The title was creative and the content was awesome, but I ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Cosmic Eulogy
Hey, RoyalHighness! So I really liked the content of this, although it felt kind of awkward to read. What I mean is that the line breaks are placed very frequently, ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Diaboli (Red Velvet Chapter 1)
Hey, again! :D (I hope you don't see me as a creepy stalker by now!) So, this is very interesting. I've never read a story like this before, although that ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Delicate One (Red Velvet Prologue)
Hey, so we meet again! I was just browsing through your works after the Cinderella story, because I wanted to read more of what you could write. And look what ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Cinderella's Happily Ever Never
Hello there, bloodybelle01! So this was definitely a very interesting story. Kind of like those 'fairy-tales for adults' type of stories. Of course, this was much more nicer if I ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: unconventionaL
Hey Maverick! well o,bviously i dont have any grammar point.outs for you, ha-ha! Nicely done! This poem was highly interesting and I really loved it. To say, I felt mildly ...
Apr 13, 2015 -
Re: Not A Wonderland
Hey, englishbreakfastgirl! I'd first like to say that this was a very deep and analytical prologue. You have described 'life' in a way that didn't make me confused in any ...
Apr 13, 2015 -
Re: The Girl Who Became an Island
Hey, Wasabi! What a good day to write a review! So frankly, I loved this idea. It was so original and kind of childish, almost, like a short fairytale, as ...
Feb 22, 2015
