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I really liked the use of the celestial bodies in the poem, I think you could greatly connect them. The last stanza is amazing especially the line - "I’m still ...

Well written! There's no clarity of the future and one shouldn't be stuck in the past, the only way we can escape from overthinking about them is to live today, ...

A piece of writing that nearly everybody can relate to! Everybody is desperate to leave their homes and return to their normal lives, missing their friends and families. But if ...

Wow, even though there's so much negative that can be made out from this article, you effortlessly gave an optimistic approach to it. Finely written! I liked the second paragraph. ...

A very well written poem. I like the metaphor used in the poem 'dark room'. I would like to suggest some changes to make: 1. In the following line, I ...

Greatly done! "...I am one of those people who have judged teen moms before..." I like the fact that you are admitting that also used to judge people and also ...

A really well written poem. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every line! "I’m sixteen now, and all the boys I want Are the crumpled up faces On my One Direction ...

The poem contains the emotions of helplessness and anger. It is calling out to all those people who have been wronged. "not only for him, but myself" I like the ...

I love the beginning of the poem, a positive start, telling that one needs to be observant of the surrounding and find meaning in them. "Beautiful thing lies around us; ...

WOW. A really good piece of writing! Its quite hard to think from a different perspective, but you did it effortlessly. I loved reading each and every line. :) You ...

You just put my thoughts into your words. I can totally relate to this piece of writing, especially these days. There's a lot of pressure I am putting myself in ...

WOW. I really loved this poem! :o With this short poem, you described the whole journey of the River. The following lines are the ones I loved the most: "Each ...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem! How can one not when it's relatable. The following lines are the ones I liked the most: "Slapping one to death never stops the ...

This poem is amazing. The first thing I like about this poem is the image you have created in the minds of the readers. Second, the state of mind had ...

It's so painful to witness someone you really love to not be there with you for the rest of your life. Reminds me of the people I have lost. I ...