Hello AnoCannotUserName,
Stellarjay here for a quick review of the book review! Overall, the review was nicely written. It was very smooth and had some good points to it.
1) I noticed only one grammer mistake. "even who they look like they are hurts a lot. " I believe it should be "even who they look like hurts a lot."
2) Generally in a book review, you wouldn't say "I" because that draws the attention away from the book and onto your own opinion. Now, I don't know if you meant the review to be your own opinion and thoughts on the book or for it to be a general review. So you can disregard this comment if you want to.
3) I would personally add more quotes to back up your points. This will also make it more interesting to read.
4) At the beginning of your review, you first mention the book and it's author. "The Pregnancy Project by Gaby Rodriguez." But then at the end of the review you mention her and another person "Gaby Rodriquez and Jenna Glatzer for an amazing book." If Jenna is a co-author of the book, I would mention her at the beginning too.
5) I noticed you focused a lot on teen mom stereotypes and your opinion on it. I would personally focus on what the book's message was and what it said. In a book review, you either want to make someone read it or make someone hate it. (I'm really sorry if I sound harsh!)
Your review was really well written and it had some excellent points! Again, I'm sorry if I sound harsh. Feel free to disregard any of my comments. I really liked your book review! Keep on writing and have a good rest of your day!
- Stellarjay
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