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Hi Magebird! I'm here to do a review of your poem :-) I haven't read your storybook yet, but I did read a little bit of information about your character ...

Hi there BrokenHeartsAri! I'm here to review your poem :-) I'll be addressing some things I liked, some things I think you could work on, and my overall thoughts! First ...

Hi FourLeafClover! I'm here to review your poem here :-) The first thing I noticed while reading this poem was that you didn't include any periods (except in the final ...

Wow, I really loved this piece! Horror/suspense is one of my favorite genres to read (especially for short stories) and I feel that you did a great job at creating ...

Hi there Luna! I see you're new here to YWS, so welcome! I'm here for a quick review of your work so let's jump in :) The first thing that ...

Hi there! I'm here for a quick review of your work, which immediately caught my eye because of the title. Let's jump right in! There are a few small things ...

Hi there! What an interesting poem you've got here - I see you tried to write a villanelle but didn't quite get there, as you're short by 3 lines and ...

Hi there JenTep! I'm popping in for a quick review of your short story, which I thought was overall an adorable piece and definitely something that I'm sure many people ...

Hi Draculus, I noticed that this is one of the older works in the Green Room as of right now, so I figured I'd give this chapter a read and ...

Hi Elinor, I'm back for another review of your short story. The first part was great and has me thinking about a lot of questions, so I was curious to ...

Hi there Elinor! I'm here for a quick review of your short story :) Right from the get go, I was intrigued with where the story would be going, right ...

Hi Barsha, I'm here for a quick review of your poetry. Let's jump right in! The first thing that I noticed was that your poem is one large stanza, which ...

Hey there! Just popping in for a quick review :) To start off, I really enjoyed reading this! My favorite stanza was the fifth where you wrote Tell me As ...

Hi there! I really love this short little poem you've written. I honestly don't have anything that I genuinely think needs improvement, I just have a suggestion about punctuation that ...

Hi there, what an interesting short story and unique take on sleep paralysis! There are a few things I think you could work on, but overall I enjoyed your work. ...