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  • Article / Essay » Politics, Politics Re: Letter to the Prime minister

    Hi there seekingthetruth, First of all, overall, I liked this letter. I am not sure whether you are actually intending to send it to Theresa May, or just wrote it ...

    May 12, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forever

    Hi there, I really loved this poem. It is brief and to the point, and you have done an amazing job delivering your feelings about that one special person. I ...

    May 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: How to Write a Novel, 101

    Hi there, i loved this poem. It certainly brought me a smile at the end of a long day :) I am sure all writers can relate to all the ...

    Jan 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: This could be Heaven

    Hi there, Wow, I loved this poem! It is very brief, to the point, well-written, and understandable. As a general comment, I'd like to say that you made an excellent ...

    Sep 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Babysitting (Flash Fiction)

    Hi there, OHH-EMM-GEE, this story is very short and yet quite scary and excellently written. I loved the way you made good choice with the words such as "pound" to ...

    Sep 22, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I wanted to fly

    Hi there, mb1221 is here to review this piece. As soon as I read the first two sentences, I got hooked to this piece. This is a very short, but ...

    Jul 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anxiety

    Hi there. I have one word to describe this poem: "WOW!" In as few as seventeen lines, you successfully managed to convey deep emotions and thoughts that are caused by ...

    Jul 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Unrequited.

    Hi, mb1221 here to review. All I can say is that I loved this poem. The emotion you want to put forward is clear cut, yet full of imagery and ...

    Sep 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: The hand that first held mine

    Hi there! I am amazed by reading this. This is a great poem. The imagery you have created in the first stanza is wonderful and it fits the poem perfectly. ...

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Blue Lives Matter

    Hello, mb1221 is finally back to YWS and writing his first review after a long time :) This idea you want to put forward within this essay is clear-cut, but ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Script » General, Humor Re: xi

    Hi there, I enjoy reading and reviewing plays. So here goes another review :) This play has a huge potential, but I think it is incomplete (Of course, it is ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Script » General, General Re: Done

    Hi there, I loved the script but I would like to make a few comments, in the kindest way possible and I hope that they'll be useful :) 1 - ...

    May 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If I Were A Color

    Hello there, mb1221 here to review. My only reaction to this poem is "Wow!" First of all, I clicked on the work just because of the title; it is very ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Script » Theatre, Humor Re: I'ma Cop

    Hi there, I really liked this piece. It is very humorous. In the beginning of the piece, I thought he was actually a cop, and I said to myself "Wow, ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Looking Out My Front Door

    Wow, the context of this poem is brilliant. I got really sentimental after reading this. Greatly written, clear phrases. I would just like to say a couple of things for ...

    Aug 30, 2015


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