mayyda

For a moment the title made me wonder, what is it about? but the moment i started reading The gears turn incessantly Pausing for no one. Not time, nor life ...

I"v always tried to come up with something short yet meaningful. This piece has it all. Kind of like it Keep writing :)

I"v always tried to come up with something short yet meaningful. This piece has it all. Kind of like it Keep writing :)

I"v always tried to come up with something short yet meaningful. This piece has it all. Kind of like it Keep writing :)

Thanks all, your comments fill me with the right energy :)

Thanks for your encouragement, well i wanted to portray both the loving side plus the strict( that i referred as Hitler) side of a mother, that is what all mothers ...

Thats really sweet of you :)

I suppose i'm late with the reply but I found your review really supporting and encouraging at the same time :)....... Thanks and I hope to grab your attention to ...

Thanks mephistophelesangel ..... For the appreciation. However the line: Planning something and ending up doing instead... was written to depict the fact that with friends one can not hook to ...

Thanks mephistophelesangel ..... For the appreciation. However the line: Planning something and ending up doing instead... was written to depict the fact that with friends one can not hook to ...

thanks for your kind words.

I just let it be the way it come me, although I usually don't do this. You can refer to my old poems or you will see more in future, ...

I 'l love to see what would you do, as I can relate your writing passion, much to that of mine. All the best. Looking forward to your submissions :)

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Thanks, good to find that you got the best message out of it. Your correction is considerable, but I avoided the repetitive use of maney. If you could suggest an ...