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WRITER SAYS…
I had always wanted to be a writer & traveller. I lagged no inspiration around but I just never got the right time to take the move. Now I feel like I should take the move before I turn 18, I mean before I turn into an official Indian adult. I firmly believe I should do something to mark the end of my pre-18 days.
Well my besties Remo (a terrible pimp), Jay (a kiddo irritation symbol) have been mocking me bad with this ethic of mine. And I know the first expression Ranit Mukherjee, Anupam Majumder (my favorite Bongs) and Bhavin Patel (my favorite Gujju) will give seeing my name as authorJ. Anyways, I don’t care I want to do this. And yes am doing this!![Thumbs down to you all]. And am sure Ritesh Yadav (the coolest Bihari I know) and Amar Rai (a human with pig like nose: cute) will be with my decision like a good brother as always.
The pre 18 days are “the most missed time” in college days, as many people I know says…and even many facebook pages say this but I have hardly heard anyone write about it. Maybe everyone is busy finding colleges for graduation, preparing for entrances, blah blah …but me?? I am jobless and tired of waiting for the university counselings for admission and call letters. Even sick of going out, using fb, whatsapp, hike etcetera etcetera. And m quitting on my NIIT edgineer classes ,guitar lessons and swimming classes because am desperate to do this, to do what I like , to write a book. My book aims to reveal all the unexpected craps and the cock and bull tales of every 21st century Indian teen. Sorry, I am excluding most of the mamma’s good boys and girls story. And sorry to bad boys and bad girls for revealing the truth.
I pray the readers like it and please excuse all the shits I commit here as am new and a complete non professional version.
P.S: Take it as a fiction else my parents will surely kill me if it’s not …hope you understood what I mean dearies!!
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I think it will be a good story if it doesn't get dramatic or have a huge plot that no one expects. Have a realistic story / diary is easy when they are adult characters because they are able to do more than children.
I still would like to read it when you get it finished.
This is a very good piece. I can't wait to see your novel. I have, however, a few slight issues. If I were you, I wouldn't use symbols instead of words. It is kind of lazy. A couple of time you left out a few letters, but this is easy to sort out. My favourite paragraph is the second, as I loved the brackets parts. Apart from the issues I have pointed out, this is a great piece. I want to see more!
Lioness
thank u......hahaha......m lazy
great poem! great structure and use of words. I love the way it dosnt ryme! its excellent and good use of adjectives. i want to read more of your excellent work! your such a great writer and i want to read more of your fantastic work! i love they its set out and i love the way you have used speech and punctuation. Please post more of your work and give everybody the pleasure of reading it!
great poem! great structure and use of words. I love the way it dosnt ryme! its excellent and good use of adjectives. i want to read more of your excellent work! your such a great writer and i want to read more of your fantastic work! i love they its set out and i love the way you have used speech and punctuation. Please post more of your work and give everybody the pleasure of reading it!
thank u so much!!
i vl post the 1st chapter soon!!
I 'l love to see what would you do, as I can relate your writing passion, much to that of mine. All the best.
Looking forward to your submissions
thank u@mayda