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I decided to ignore the bit about it being an autobiographic piece, and ended up feeling like this was some sort of riddle, after which I tried to think metaphorically ...

One question. Who's writing this, if you've been swallowed up? :D Hey there! It's Malachitear here for a review! I like what you tried to do here, a real gory, ...

Hey there! It's Binder here for a review. I really like the idea behind this, and liked your little attempt at the imagery at the end. Unlike the reviewer before ...

I came here because of the title, thinking you were using some kind of spin off the poem, 'Do not go softly into that Good Night' by Dylan Thomas. I ...

Hey! Another pleasing review by the Apple Dumpling Gang! ( I'm starting to get used to this) I loved the way you made this poem have a nice, circular ending, ...

Another Apple Dumpling-brand Review! I love the image of the lotus, like the user below me, but I feel as though it could have been replaced with another stalked flower ...

Hey! Apple Dumpling Gang here for a review. I liked the way you made it seem so hard for the persona to hold on to anything, and I feel that ...

Hey there! Apple Dumpling Gang here for a review. Double whopper! The first was amusing, a tad sweet, and the second was sad :( I liked the first's concept, and ...

I was a little uncomfortable reading this at first, after seeing the rating and reding the phrase "Touched his masculine arms" because I really had the sense I was about ...

Hey there! Apple Dumpling Gang here for a review. Now one thing that I liked here, (and this surprise me, too) is that you used dialogue pretty well. When I ...

Hey there! Apple Dumpling Gang for a short review. My favorite line was the last, because it's one of the few times you used a half-rhyme, and that really made ...

Woah. As an anime fan, I am partial to this. I liked the fact that used naruto characters in here, too, but maybe this was more suited to another, anime ...

Hey there! Apple Dumpling Gang for a review! It took me a while to read this through, but I thought it was rather good! The part I liked best was ...

Hey! Apple Dumpling Gang for a review! This story was great! It had everything necessary in a good plot, you handled everything rather well. The only thing I felt was ...

Hey! I'm here from the Apple Dumpling Gang for a review! I really liked the first part, and then it turned dark and gave me chills. My favorite part was ...