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Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 1
Hey there! Writing a short review! I liked the plot. I think it's a good fanfiction. I liked the way you started it. Liam and kayle both surprised! The story ...
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Re: Sinking Softly
Hey Alliyah! I am writing a review because I have to review something from February! I must say you really good at writing poems though I am not really good ...
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Re: Pause...Listen To Me
Hey there! You are an awesome writer. I like your style. I always thought this kind of writings are boring and need a lot of time to read. But I ...
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Re: Every INDIAN 00'S KID Will Relate To:
Hey there! I live in your neighboring country, Bangladesh! And you don't know how much the article matches with me! I think you are right. I have seen the era ...
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Re: Servant's Love
Hey there! Writing a review! I loved your poem. It has a lot of emotions and desire. I liked the way you wrote the feelings of the servant. She loved ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 20 of Princess of the Sea
Hey there! Writing a review! Sorry! There was a mistake. So, I had to write again! I liked your story. You have put much effort into it... When you write ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: A Merry Band of Monsters - Chapter 2
Hey there! Writing a review! Your story is unique but I have some questions... 1) If most of them are hidden, why did Aria come in front of the children? ...
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Re: strangers
Hey there! Writing a review! I liked your poem very much. The way you wrote it is excellent. It's very realistic! But I think it would have looked much better ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Powerless
Hey there! I liked your story. Much suspense. I think you should have written a little more about Harry and then kate. You know at first I thought Kate was ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Time Machine
Hey there! I liked your poem. It was creative and dramatic. I liked these lines the most: "He grit his teeth and couldn't breath and thought that he would die. ...
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Re: It's just the beginning
Hey there! I liked your plot. You are doing great! but there are some things I wish to tell you. Well, the doctor said that the boy has a phobia ...
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Re: Pain
Hey there! Your poem is awesome. Dramatic, great words... If I am not wrong, the whole poem is about how pain hurts you, right? I think you said that pain ...
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Re: Now only I!
Hey there! Your poem is good. You have a good sense of words. And I am really weak at it! But there are some things unclear in your poem. Like ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: The Dentist Office (short)
Hey there. Your story is awesome. You are a very good writer. I liked the story very much.(Though I am really don't like to go dentists!) I liked the way ...
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Re: There's a storm brewing
Hi there. Your poem is excellent! But you know u could have shorted the first para. Well, in our country we don't call this kind of writing poetry. This is ...
Mar 25, 2018
