madisonfrevert

Hi CelticThunder (: I really like the simple message you portray here. I only have a few suggestions!! First, in the second line I think the poem would flow better ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this poem...kind of reminds me of one I wrote myself :) One of the first things I noticed was the simile "hiding under blankets like rotting ...

I'm not sure how to do all of the fancy work where you can bold and quote things within a review, so this will have to do haha (: I ...

Wow...I was also slightly confused by the word 'pining' in the first line, but after reading your explanation below I have a much better understanding (: I read this poem ...

I really love this...I expected this to be about abortion just based off the title and you surprised me! Personally, I really like the mother's point of view and I ...

I must admit, it is typical for me to lose interest fast, but with this poem, that was not the case whatsoever. When I first began reading this I thought ...

This gave me goosebumps...one of my favorites I have seen on the site so far (: I absolutely freaking LOVE when you said "And you are there with a half ...

This is so cute (although it is also a bit sorrowful). And I do mean that in the very best way! I have to admit that I've never once thought ...

This is a very enjoyable read...I love how the force remains anonymous throughout the poem. I think that sometimes as writers we have such a well-developed idea of what we ...

Oh my goodness. This is wonderful! The rhyming was done in a way that doesn't make it read like a book for elementary students as some poems do (: this ...

Wow. I love the aura you created with this poem! I can just feel the tension that is in the room...everyone has been in awkward situations before, which makes this ...

This is a very unique point of view...not at all what I have ever thought of when hearing a thunderstorm! I love how you ended with a question that leaves ...

Wow, this is magnificent. I don't know enough about poetry myself to feel comfortable enough to give you true criticism, so instead I will tell you what I really enjoyed. ...