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Re: The 5 feeling of life.
Hiyaaaaaaaaaaa Disclaimer- this is An AbSoLuTeLy CrApPy ReViEw, PlEaSe PrOcEeD wItH CaUtIoN (huge emphasis on crappy because I haven't written a review in like....2 months?) SO LETS GET STARTED WITH ...
May 24 -
Re: What to Do, What to feel?
heyyyyyy how r you doin???? This a truly emotional piece articulating thoughts and deep emotions without confusing the brain out of me trying to interpret it. (YOU GET EXTRA POINTS ...
Apr 10 -
Re: "Oranges"
Heyyyy This poem is the perfect definition of short but sweet, having plenty of meaning behind it which adds to its beauty. 'Eyes yearn like a puppy with no owner ...
Apr 3 -
Re: Sunburnt Eyes
Heyyyyyy :D I haven't written a review in so long ( I was never good at it ) I have quite forgotten how to write a decent one, so forgive ...
Apr 2 -
Re: I Can’t Find My Voice
Heyyyy ✌️ I think this is your second poem right? Nevertheless I am here to give you a review!!! I had been thinking of writing a flash fic and I ...
Mar 15 -
Re: PETALS OF MY HEART
Although I wanted to review this as quick as I could, I can't lie that the poem was hard to interpret. The poem is so deep with emotions its quite ...
Mar 15 -
Re: THE SUN DOES NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO BE WARM
Well one thing is for sure from this poem- I NEED to stop writing about the sun's warmth and its gentleness. Nevertheless I'm here to review your work!!!!! (I apologize ...
Mar 14 -
Re: There’s a knock on my door
Heyyy It's great to know that YWS writers are writing such beautiful poems to raise awareness about eminent issues as such. The poem is painful to read, painful to accept ...
Mar 14 -
Re: Fear Of An Empty Room
Heyyy ✌️ I see that you're new to the website, and so am I. Leaving that behind I will be reviewing this gorgeous poem today Starting on strong with a ...
Mar 14 -
Re: My Mind Palace
Heyyyyy ✌️ In my opinion this poem is perfectly humorous (slightly painful)!! In the poem, you describe your mind as a mind palace which is cluttered and a total mess. ...
Mar 14 -
Re: Queen of Hollow Night
heyyyyy Please Please do release your chapters with a few days of gap or even a day of gap. "Something inside me split open. It started in my chest-not pain, ...
Mar 13 -
Re: lovely conversations
Heyyy :) Your poem quiet nicely captures that feeling idk, where you are at your utmost vulnerable but don't feel so- "And even dreams they never dared to share with ...
Mar 13 -
Re: Lies
This poem was a little too relatable...sadly that is. I like how the flow of the poem (ig?) that continuous questioning gives us some insight.... like one side talks about ...
Mar 12 -
Re: Cherry Blossoms And Steel (NOT YET READY!)
Ok that was a lottt to process but as 12 yr old reading a 12 yr old's work... im oddly satisfied. Great starting. You managed to grab the reader's attention ...
Mar 12 -
Re: The Vampire And The Mortal (Chapter 1)
hey gurl!!! I js joined today and i'm quiet new to... the entire thing... Fortunately I stumbled upon this in the green room and u can count me to read ...
Mar 12
