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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The 5 feeling of life.

    Hiyaaaaaaaaaaa Disclaimer- this is An AbSoLuTeLy CrApPy ReViEw, PlEaSe PrOcEeD wItH CaUtIoN (huge emphasis on crappy because I haven't written a review in like....2 months?) SO LETS GET STARTED WITH ...

    May 24
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: What to Do, What to feel?

    heyyyyyy how r you doin???? This a truly emotional piece articulating thoughts and deep emotions without confusing the brain out of me trying to interpret it. (YOU GET EXTRA POINTS ...

    Apr 10
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: "Oranges"

    Heyyyy This poem is the perfect definition of short but sweet, having plenty of meaning behind it which adds to its beauty. 'Eyes yearn like a puppy with no owner ...

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Sunburnt Eyes

    Heyyyyyy :D I haven't written a review in so long ( I was never good at it ) I have quite forgotten how to write a decent one, so forgive ...

    Apr 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Can’t Find My Voice

    Heyyyy ✌️ I think this is your second poem right? Nevertheless I am here to give you a review!!! I had been thinking of writing a flash fic and I ...

    Mar 15
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: PETALS OF MY HEART

    Although I wanted to review this as quick as I could, I can't lie that the poem was hard to interpret. The poem is so deep with emotions its quite ...

    Mar 15
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: THE SUN DOES NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO BE WARM

    Well one thing is for sure from this poem- I NEED to stop writing about the sun's warmth and its gentleness. Nevertheless I'm here to review your work!!!!! (I apologize ...

    Mar 14
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: There’s a knock on my door

    Heyyy It's great to know that YWS writers are writing such beautiful poems to raise awareness about eminent issues as such. The poem is painful to read, painful to accept ...

    Mar 14
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Fear Of An Empty Room

    Heyyy ✌️ I see that you're new to the website, and so am I. Leaving that behind I will be reviewing this gorgeous poem today Starting on strong with a ...

    Mar 14
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: My Mind Palace

    Heyyyyy ✌️ In my opinion this poem is perfectly humorous (slightly painful)!! In the poem, you describe your mind as a mind palace which is cluttered and a total mess. ...

    Mar 14
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Queen of Hollow Night

    heyyyyy Please Please do release your chapters with a few days of gap or even a day of gap. "Something inside me split open. It started in my chest-not pain, ...

    Mar 13
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: lovely conversations

    Heyyy :) Your poem quiet nicely captures that feeling idk, where you are at your utmost vulnerable but don't feel so- "And even dreams they never dared to share with ...

    Mar 13
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Lies

    This poem was a little too relatable...sadly that is. I like how the flow of the poem (ig?) that continuous questioning gives us some insight.... like one side talks about ...

    Mar 12
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: Cherry Blossoms And Steel (NOT YET READY!)

    Ok that was a lottt to process but as 12 yr old reading a 12 yr old's work... im oddly satisfied. Great starting. You managed to grab the reader's attention ...

    Mar 12
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Vampire And The Mortal (Chapter 1)

    hey gurl!!! I js joined today and i'm quiet new to... the entire thing... Fortunately I stumbled upon this in the green room and u can count me to read ...

    Mar 12


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