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In the first stanza it seems as if you were forcing the rhyme. I like how you used the simile though, I love similes! I love the second stanza, it's ...

Well, in this poem I am obviously expressing deep feelings for a person. In the beginning of the poem I am saying that I wanted things to get better in ...

This is beautiful. I just needed you to know that, thanks.

Flawless.

This is really cute! I love your use of metaphor throughout the poem, it adds imagery. Really fantastic job. :)

Thanks for the great review, I appreciate it.

Thanks you so much.

Alrighty! Thanks a bunch. :)

Thank you! You have no idea how much this means to me.

I love seeing other authors' points of view, thanks for the comment. I guess there is kind of an emphasis on to you, but I just think it sounds a ...

Thanks! I appreciate it!

Thank you so much! haha. Yeah, I noticed that my commas were wayyyy off, but I wasn't too worried about that. Thanks a lot again, I will definitely use your ...

oh man. This poem was great. You're good, indeed, indeed.

Fantastic! Superb! I simply love this! How could anyone NOT like this poem? This is so simple, and cute, yet it has so much meaning to it. You definitely know ...

hmm....this was very...interesting. I did enjoy reading this, it caught my attention from the very beginning. I loved all of your details in the third paragraph, especially the last sentence ...