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I have saw that you fixed your mistakes mentioned below. This must have been hard to write since most of it is in present tense. I find that present tense ...

This is very short. Let me see if I am able to review it or not. It rhymes which I guess is good. Most poems I see either rhyme or ...

It is hard to say anything bad about this story. It needs some help on grammar. There isn't a lot so I'm not going to point them out but you ...

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Wow, this is hard. Ummmmm how do you do this. It different trying to review a big poem but this is so short. Wow, eerrrr.... I see that Layers is ...

This is a very good poem. I wish I could point out some things but DreamWork already beat me to the punch. No seriously, I wanted that fruit punch. Here ...

'IcyFlame says... Can I start off by saying how much I love that you've used Nightmare Before Christmas lyrics in this? It's the main reason I clicked on it so ...

Talk about the true value of friendship. You really defined it well. You had some spelling mistakes. You said their instead of there. I hide things from my friends. My ...

I'm here to review and kick you out of the green room. It stinks of dust and mold in there. This is amazing. I didn't see any grammatical errors. I ...

My main goal is to get you out of the green room. Honestly it is starting to stink of writers sweat in there. Peeee Yuuu. How many times does she ...

DragonNextec says... Dragon here, First off i have never laughed so hard in my life on this before, So ill give you a 100% Great work here Loved it and ...

'This is the girl who once at ten alive snails and five toads alive just so a boy would take her to her tithe school dance!' When you say the ...

*screams* here to review this hugely horrifying story. I hope you didn't waste any points. This Is kinda disappointing. I was expecting ghouls, ghosts, and goblins. That kind of stuff. ...

Fiera is right you know. You do sound like an uber nerd using spreadsheets. Don't deny it. It's true. Nitpick- You said 'my byself'. Do you mean 'by myself'? I'm ...

lostthoughts911 says... This is absolutely different than what people usually write. People don't usually post their arguments with their characters. They would simply be too embarrassed. I found this