I liked this poem, it has some really strong language that puts that image in my head. I like that you varied the pace of the poem, particularly near the middle but it felt just a little rushed. As soon as the poem started I couldn't wait to get through it so that I could see who exactly the person is that you are talking about. This wasn't resolved, but that's okay. It really stimulates the imagination when you leave the character slightly vague so that we can form who they are using the information you gave us. Overall, it's enjoyable poem!
Points: 362
Reviews: 35
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