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I didn't see anything to nitpick. Maybe because you are just that good or you did what the reviews below me suggested. This reminds me very well of Assassin's Creed. ...

Hey there! I haz some nitpickings. (About to be complete hypocritical so bear with me now) Well first, you spelled tunnel and prologue wrong in the title. It's ok because ...

Why did she walk all that way anyways? I have no nitpickings. Well, none that I could see anyways. If I saw that spider-snake (perhaps a spake or a snider?) ...

Wow, emotional. Is this before or after she got cut out on her power? I am pretty sure this is after, since she is in the cell and all. The ...

That's what happens when you cheat. I guess he didn't realize that even though that his date was blind, she has other senses, like the sense of smell, taste, touch, ...

Welcome to review day! I didn't see anything wrong. You really are getting better! That's an interesting concept that she wrote Alice in Wonderland. Of course it makes sense of ...

I just realized that this was in present tense. While past tense shows the person stayed alive, present tense presents the mystery of if they will stay alive. I have ...

I was right! It is the Alice from Alice in Wonderland. The only thing I saw that could be fixed is the number 60. It's a number nitpick I have ...

Ok, first off, welcome to YWS! People tend to forget welcome new comers sometimes. Hope you can make it to YWS cup! This is a page? Wow, small page :p ...

Um, you put that it was based off what happened to your friend? Is your friend still alive or is she/he a ghost as well? (If she/he is a ghost ...

Hey Lu! I had to catch up on the 3 chapters I missed in order to read this. I didn't see any mistakes grammatically or spelling wise. If you had ...

Hey, you requested that I review you and here I am. Sorry if this isn't as good as you wanted but had reviewer's block for a while. I am going ...

Hey, here to review as requested. This is very emotional. I am sorry I am late but reviewer's block. I sit here, reading this and realizing that the art of ...

Well this hasn't been reviewed in forever (well except yesterday but still) and I am here to review. This is gives picturesque scenes within the story that makes you feel ...

Well this hasn't been reviewed in a while so I am here! Ok Lu, I have some trust issues here. Apparently you weren't as bad as you thought when you ...