lordgluzman

Thanks

This was totally awsome. This was real rock! I could imagine the pictuers of you song. Even though I never read your books I think that they are cool. Anyeays ...

I actuallyhad a little fear that you guys would not like this. I am actually really glad about this. But as you can see rap is not my style, Death ...

I can't say this was a great song, it should have been in the lyric poetry. FOR ME IT WAS TOO short. But the words were beautiful. In that case ...

Thank you

What is actually pissing me off that nobody is commenting on this song! I will type this up that your song could go up so everyone could see it in ...

Thanks! Actually your comment made me laugh hysterically especially this part: I hate drugs

i like it... but its hard to read metal lyrics on paper... they always look too over the top without the screams and that this is incredibly slipknot-esque. you a ...

LOL, I didn't get the song but it still sounds so cool! I don't know why.

You need to add more punctuation, The song was kinda short for me. But it was really fun to read, I enjoyed your song. But if it is a heavy ...

I will put this in mined. Yea I do have a heavy melody for this. :twisted:

I read your message. So I want to apologize, I guess I didn't get the lyrics.

The only way we can know what type of song you are writing is if you put punctuations. To show if your angry or if the song is fast. So ...

Ha, If this is about you keep strong. Honestly nobody (Except one) cheated on me. But they didn't exactly cheat they just liked another guy. Anyways this song was good. ...

Not bad! But it was too short for me. I hope people wont grade this song bad because of the language and the misspelling. This is just what rapers do. ...