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The lyrics are unbearable.
I dont get it. It is just trash and it sounds like you're Chris Brown- it sounds like your about to abuse the unlucky girl who had to hear these lyrics.
Critism poem.
You over used 'Bitch'
And that's never good.
Who uses 'bitch' that much anyways,
Unless you live in the 'Hood'.
Quite frankly, I'm sorry,
I had to critize like this,
But I must go now,
Or else I will 'piss'.
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That was my well ryhmed. It had rythm.
Yours didn't.
As I said, I hate to critize like this, but, harsh and modest, this was awful.
Why? Why is it I am what I am? That sounds like a kid friendly song. Like
'I am what I am
No one can change that.
You could try,
But I wont budge'
or something like that. Seriously. Get some help.
Sorry again, mate. It stinks.
-Aubree
Points: 890
Reviews: 9
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