If you think you're worthless.
If you think you don't belong.
If you think of suicide, well honey,
You're thinking wrong.
Life is measured by how you live.
Life is measured by the love you give.
You can't give or live if you're dead.
Going another day will make you stronger.
Going the extra distance, living longer.
Days turn into nights, sooner or later it will be easier.
Don't listen to what other people say about you.
The only person who knows you is you.
You're the only one that can save yourself.
No one ever said it was easy.
What doesn't kill you can only make you stronger.
Live for yourself.
Not someone else.
*Spoke part*
People say things to hurt others because they have their own insecurities.
Not giving into their lies will make you the better person.
Putting people down is only an escape from their lives that they have created for themselves.
No one can put you down as long as you don't let them
*end of speaking part*
You can't break me.
(you won't make me!)
You won't make me your rag doll to throw around.
No one push me to the ground.
(no one push me down!)
If you do, I will always get back up
(Get back up!)
You will be wishing that I wasn't the one you tried to tear apart.
I will rip into your heart.
(Into your heart!)
Make your insides bleed.
(bleed, bleed, bleed!)
I'll make you think twice about what you're about to do.
(Think twice before doing a thing!)
The only person who can save yourself is you.
(save yourself!)
**Note: This song was written for a friend of mine. She was in a bad state in her life and I made this song for her to hopefully help her overcome the demons in her head and outside, telling her that she wasn't worth anything and that she couldn't become a musician because she was a freak(pretty redundant statement there actually, look at Marilyn Manson). We hardly talk these days, so I hope she's doing fine and still breathing. And to get a feel for this song.. I imagined it in heavy metal type, especially at the end. Any critiques are gladly welcome. 
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Ther werearts of it I really like, and few that i thought were a little cheesy. But i know very well that sometimes the lyrics don't look like they'l be any good until you hear wht there supposed to sound like.
I do love the meaning behing this, and that you wrote it for your friend. I hope she got help and isn't depressed anymore. I give her my best of wishes.
i so just came up with some piano music for this song.
I like the lyrics. By the way are you a christian? Most heavy metal(scream) bands are christian core bands.
What is actually pissing me off that nobody is commenting on this song! I will type this up that your song could go up so everyone could see it in the forum. I would have add this song to favourites if I could.
Awesome man!
Glad you liked it. I've decided to take on a new turn anyway. I still might write some soft type kinds of songs, but mostly heavy metal. I think I have one song that is a romance type... it was for a girl though, so yeah. It kinda had to be in that way. Anywhooo.... but I'm getting more into writing a lot more lyrics than stories. -shrugs- Short and horrific stories are more in my heading and of course lyrics.
Thanks again for your input.
Thanks, I respect you for making it heavy metal! This song was awesome, it had everything. Justice, moral, beat, rhythm, and allot more. But the best part of this lyric was:
You can't break me.
(you won't make me!)
You won't make me your rag doll to throw around.
No one push me to the ground.
(no one push me down!)
If you do, I will always get back up
(Get back up!)
You will be wishing that I wasn't the one you tried to tear apart.
This was so awesome! If we would live near each other I would have meat you in a place and take lots of your lyrics and made awesome melodies for them with Lordanzius. Except he is really lazy...
Oh, I almost forgout to give you a star.