lordgluzman

WOW, I am a little bit freaked out because I am the only male in this conversation. I read evrybodys comments as well which is makeing me a little bit ...

I am glad I can comment once again on your poems. Okay lets get started! Pretty much all your poems are good, but to be honest with you I think ...

This is a wonderful poem! why you didn't tell me about this one? Anyways this was a really lovely and peaceful poem (Unlike your funny ones for example the fish ...

I am sorry man. This poem is really good: long, theme, plot, the words that you used! But it got boring in the SECOND HALF. I understand that this is ...

Thanks, I respect you for making it heavy metal! This song was awesome, it had everything. Justice, moral, beat, rhythm, and allot more. But the best part of this lyric ...

To be honest I didn't get the humour. Your song is still pretty cool, but to tell you the truth I got bored in the end. Don't blame yourself it's ...

Okay.... That was totally cool, awesome and funny. I really like your poems because they are all funny. I have only one thing to crit: So my cousin and I ...

To be honest I didn't like this song. It was okay.... You need to add punctuation to show the mood of the song. I also was hoping to see more ...

What the heck. You guys should comment not just write 5 words. This song was awesome especially if it's Metal! Is it metal? It better be. You got a perfect ...

Nice man! I liked it. But lots of people around here will maybe get offended but I don't give. I disagree with some stuff that you wrote about weed and ...

Hey pretty cool. I like it! If this is a true thing you should stand tall and give or send this song to that kid you like. If a girl ...

This song was awesome. I made a kinda heavy melody for it. I think you would have liked it. The emotions you brought were really strong in away. The rhyming ...

Hey, Pretty good this reminds me of a song I wrote "Never Coming Back" But The girl that I loved in my song died so we didn't really comeback like ...

SUPER GOOD! You had moral and the theme. But I did felt that some of the rhyming was forst + I think that this part doesn't fit in: And Mom ...

OK.... I am sorry if I will make you hate me for saying that your poem sucked! UNTILL I READ THE ENDING. YES....WHEN I READ THE LAST PART OF THE ...