Published January 22, 2009
Somehow memories come back
Finding the moment to make me cry
So tears start to fall
Because since I left nothing is the same.
There’s a hole inside of me
All this time we’ve lost and that we can’t take back
It’s too late
So remember that night
That the stars shined up in the sky
And we talked and laugh until the sun came up
It felt like those days back, because with you I know that love exist
CHORUS
So take me back, back with you
Because you have my heart now, and I can’t live without it
So take those tears and hold on because we’re back
Back together in our hearts.
Because distance means nothing in true love,
And that’s how all the miles us separate,
Somehow disappear, and you’re here,
Next to me, whispering words that make me feel,
That you’re on my side.
CHORUS
So take me back, back with you
Because you have my heart now, and I can’t live without it
So take those tears and hold on because we’re back
Back together in our hearts.
BRIDGE
So I’ve learned to live without you,
Even though happiness isn’t enough
I know you’ll be on my side, even if I’m wrong
And since I’ve never found a better friend than you
I don’t want to lose you,
I don’t want us to go separate ways, even though we are now.
CHORUS
So take me back, back with you
Because you have my heart now, and I can’t live without it
So take those tears and hold on because we’re back
Back together in our hearts.
Take me back
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the song was amazing kudos to you i thought it was totally awesome.
i loved the chorus it was very catchy.
to me it was a mix of pop, rock, and just a tad bit of country.
um...i dont know if the song was meant to be slow or fast but i started off slow and then fast i just really love the chorus i can totally dance to that i am going to reply to some more of your stuff so look out for my name lolz bye
BEST OF LUCK
Awesome. It was really quite strong for a song.(That rhymed!
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Your chorus was beautiful. Actually, your entire song was beautiful. *Gold star*
Anyways, I will end this rant with one last conclusion: beautiful!
Peacee
_Writing for love is a passion_
~Lexie~
This is really good, the way I was singing it in my head was like a teenage pop star singing it with country music playing but that is just me. It sounds great though and it really reminds me of real life events. Not mine personally but girl's I knew. very excellent!
Hey, Pretty good this reminds me of a song I wrote "Never Coming Back" But The girl that I loved in my song died so we didn't really comeback like in your song. Anyways I liked the titel, the words, and the emotions that you brought to me. So good job.