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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Mom

    Stop. Please just stop bugging everyone and leave this site.

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two Sides

    Hi! I forget what I meant, but I might have meant italicization. On the word someday, you half italicized it, half didn't, which sort of threw me off. Otherwise, I ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Go Ahead and Kill Me

    This was the darkest short story I have ever read. Am I weird for liking it?

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chaotically Saving

    I loved this poem a lot. I get writer's block often, and I enjoyed seeing my pain put into words. At least that's what I got out of this. You ...

    Dec 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1: We Thought You Were Dead

    This book is amazing! Well, so far! I can practically guess what is going to happen. Jacque's gonna meet and fall for Jamie Nash. That name makes me want to ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: No Title

    I think a lot of people can relate to this poem and that is awesome. The formatting is wonderful and the wording is great. The poem is very descriptive and ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: I Can Hear The Piano

    I play the piano, so this poem really entertained me. I always like to play when I am mad or scared so that I can hear something I am good ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ghazal for Her

    I could feel the seasons changing when I read this. The poem is very descriptive and you can really feel the seasons. I really liked the ending and think it ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ghazal for Her

    I could feel the seasons changing when I read this. The poem is very descriptive and you can really feel the seasons. I really liked the ending and think it ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Heartless

    This was an amazing poem. The "all the cuts of a soldier" was a great line. The one thing that bugged me was that to separate lines you used One ...

    Nov 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I want to close the window, but you have fallen asleep

    This poem is great. The font is amazing and so is the wording. I really enjoyed reading it. And you can read it very quickly, too, so that is great.

    Nov 26, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: No Title

    I loved it. Keep on writing poems, they are wonderful!

    Nov 26, 2019


People who say they sleep like a baby usually don't have one.
— Leo J. Burke