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**My Thoughts** This chapter was great! You told us a lot more about Ky without ruining the story! **Formatting and Grammar** Your formatting was good! The chapter was very neat, ...

**My Thoughts** Hey! LZ here with a review! I really, really liked this poem! I love the plot, the wording, and practically everything about it! **Formatting and Grammar** Your formatting ...

**My Thoughts** Hey tgham99! LZ here (again!) for a review! I enjoyed this poem. I really like the subjects you write about, it's really interesting and you write really well! ...

**My Thoughts** Hey tgham99! LZ here with a review! I liked this poem! The subject was amazing, I haven't read a poem like this before! **Formatting and Grammar** I really ...

**My Thoughts** Hello! LZ here with a review! I really liked this poem! It was funny and I enjoyed the wording! **Formatting and Grammar** The formatting was good, I didn't ...

**My Thoughts** Hey there! LZ here with a review! I did not expect as good of a poem when I clicked on this. Honestly, I expected something beer or New ...

**My Thoughts** Hi! LZ here with a review! I really liked this chapter! It was wonderful and we learn more about the character (in a way). **Formatting and Grammar** Like ...

**My Thoughts** Hey! LZ here with a review! I really liked this prologue! It sets the stage well for the future chapters (which I have read at this point). **Formatting ...

**My Thoughts** Hello there! LZ here with a review. I loved this poem! It was short and sweet, yet you said all you wanted to say (hopefully). Also, thank you ...

**My Thoughts** Hey! LZ here with a review! I liked this story. It was short enough for me to read quickly, yet you wrote it very well! There was a ...

**My Thoughts** Hey there! LZ here with a review! I really liked this poem. It was short and sweet, but you fit as much words as you needed in it. ...

**My Thoughts** Hello! I thought this was a lovely poem! I liked the first stanza the best, but they were all well written. **Formatting and Grammar** I loved the formatting. ...

***My Thoughts*** I think this is a wonderful poem! The piece flowed very well. ***Formatting and Grammar*** The formatting was great! You ended the three different stanzas very well. There ...

**My Thoughts** I really liked this poem! I loved the plot and I can tell you put a lot of time into making this poem (or you are good at ...

**My Thoughts** Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. I like how different the topic is, not many people would think of writing about this! I think some people can relate ...