looseleaf

**My Thoughts** Hey Jay! LZ here with a review. I liked this poem, it wasn't too long or too short, and the topic was great. I don't think I've seen ...

**My Thoughts** Loved this piece! It was absolutely spectacular! Hey, LZ here with a review. **Formatting and Grammar** I liked the formatting, it was very simple and neat. I liked ...

**My Thoughts** Hey Winny! LZ here with a review! Let me just say, I don't really know how to review this, but I did really like the overview of your ...

**My Thoughts** Hey tgham! Lucy here with another review! This poem was great! I liked it, though it was a bit tricky to read at times. **Formatting and Grammar/Spelling** Formatting ...

**My Thoughts** OMGGGGG I HATE YOU ALETHHHHH. Hi. I'm mad. I'm mad that Aleth is an absolutely awful person. But, he is a well-written character. Very well written. **Grammar, Punctuation, ...

**My Thoughts** Hey there! LZ here with a review! I really like this poem. It flows well and it was very easy to read. The subject was also awesome. **Formatting ...

**My Thoughts** Wowowowowow. This was a good chapter. I loved it, probably my favorite one yet! I really liked the flashback, she's such a smart mouth. **Formatting, Grammar, Punctuation, and ...

**My Thoughts** I want to put a gun against Aleths head and pull the trigger, seriously! Thinking rape was a way of teaching Ky to have fun?! Wtf. **Formatting, Grammar, ...

**My Thoughts** Hey there! LZ here with a review! I liked this poem. It was short and sweet (well, not really sweet). I especially liked the last line. **Formatting and ...

**My Thoughts** Hey there! LZ here with a review! I personally really liked this paragraph, even though it did have quite a few errors. **Formatting and Grammar** As for formatting, ...

**My Thoughts** Hey! LZ here with a review! I liked the poem. The theme (or should I say plot?) was very unique! **Formatting and Grammar** I liked the formatting! It ...

**My Thoughts** Hey Liberty! LZ here with a review! I think this might be the first piece of yours I've reviewed. I really liked it. It was unique. **Formatting and ...

**My Thoughts** I like this new character!! And "dad-hug"? That is adorable! **Formatting and Grammar** You know, I shouldn't even go over this part. You never get anything wrong or ...

**My Thoughts** What the frick. Asking if she has a partner? Rude. Hey there, LZ here with another review! This chapter was great! A lot was discussed. **Formatting and Grammar** ...

**My Thoughts** Chat? CHAT?! Aw hell naw. I really hate Aleth, as you can tell. This chapter is good, even though not much happened (except Aleth being a creep). **Formatting ...