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That was a rather graphic and have screenplay if I do say so myself. You did a nice job executing it though. You really showed the life and a struggle ...

This was eerily written, giving it a creepy, beautiful air. It is short, but the short length works. I enjoyed the attentive detail you gave in describing her beauty because ...

This seems like a nice start to the story. Your writing style is nice and simplistic, with little error. One suggestion I have is that you need to build up ...

This is a nicely formed argument. Your friend Emily backs up her claims with evidence and the organization is nicely laid out. There are several flaws though. This essay reads ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I love the darkness it had behind it and the inner turmoil displayed in physical manifestations. There is however, room for improve. I believe the ...

This was simple and elegant and very enjoyable. I love the style and prose you wrote in and the syntax you employed was perfect for this type of story. The ...

I really like the simplicity of this. The repetition of "awake" really places emphasis into the overall theme. The whole premise of the poem makes a person really think and ...

It's strange there is not much written, but I am hooked. There is something about the writing style that is simplistic and witty, yet captivating and beautiful at the end ...

This sounds like a really great idea. I have always wondered what it would be like if such a huge epidemic hit the United States. Now get to your actual ...

This concept seemed really good. However, I feel like this could have been executed better. The story lacked connective tissue and didn't flow well. I would definitely consider revising and ...