lilymoore

Hey there, again, Manda! Sorry it took me so long to get back to this; I had to have dinner with a cop tonight! (Crazy story. I’m going to stop ...

Hey there, Manda!! I know you said you only needed a review on the second part but I figured I would go ahead and review part one anyways. :) Dialogue ...

I find it almost freakishly ironic that my psychology class, which I just left, is watching Sybil. Not quite suicidal but she’s a definite loony bird! You have a great ...

Hey there, Upile!! So, I’m going to have to say right now that this is pretty awesome as far as idea goes! I mean, you see plenty of poems about ...

Hey there, ma97, and welcome to YWS! *tosses around the Welcome confetti!* First off, you should definitely party on over to the Welcome Mat and introduce yourself! You don’t have ...

Hey there, Warrior! So, right away, I have to say that I found this, for some reason, oddly catchy but this mostly had to do with a wonderful use of ...

Hey there, ilyaeelz! (Note: I have no idea how to pronounce your username.) So right off the bat, I have to say that Suz makes a really good point. You’ve ...

Hey there again, Knightly! So, I'm not going to get too nit pickie, namely because I'm at work and reviewing via my iPod...but also because there wasn't much to nit ...

Hey there, ehte! Here as requested. :D So, I’m not going to focus too much on nitpicks. If I did, I’d be stabbing at your punctuation all day because from ...

Hey there, Knightly! (How is it I always seem to forget that you’re not a new member. *head/desk* I was totally about to welcome you to YWS.) The thing I ...

Hey there, Bivrax! I won’t be too crazy with nitpicks, actually I don’t think I’ll worry with nitpicks at all seeing as how Rascalover did a wonderful job of finding ...

Hey there, Sprite! *pounces* I don’t know why I just did that but I did. I won’t nitpick. There isn’t much to nitpick so I just won’t do it as ...

Persy! I can’t for the life of me believe that I haven’t spotted this until now!!! I really and earnestly adore when you write about nature and earthy things because ...

Hey there, Emilie! Here am I! Or…um…I am here? Well, either way, I’m lilymoore, here as requested…well, I was begging sort of but still… So, I will say right off ...

Hey there, Silent! Told you I was coming for you, didn’t I? First off, always try and do even a quick bit of editing. It looks bad on your part ...