lexy

You know I’m no great poet Who can weave words around Meanings, so beautiful and poignant . But just for you I decided To find a metaphor For love. At ...

its not easy being me never hearing the sounds of glee being mocked and foiled have only brought me to a state of toil the calls the chants a seed ...

(first poem for a while, here goes nothing...) Screwing with my systems, Messing with my mind. Desperatly I search, A cure I try to find. It fills me full of ...

In the black of the night, nervously she slept, waiting for the Devil to come. when he finally came, they danced into the dark knowing they would never return. He ...

Where Are You? Can't you hear my telepathic screams Echoing across our distance? I shred my own heart (everyday) Just looking for the memories of your love I yearn for ...

We are but sinners in the hands of an angry god , upheld by no more than his mere pleasure. A conflagration smolders in eyes of malice , while the ...

Under these black lights in the atrium of the teenage heart, I whisper across the chestnut table - "Hey honey, this tastes like blood. Jesus Christ. Golgatha burns tonight." He ...

& I've got a headache, Suddenly this problem is becoming to bold, What I want is simple, In its complicated way, I haven't found what I'm looking for, At least ...

your first attempt???? well done!!! If you hadn't of put that bit about it being your first poem I would have totally thought you had been doing this for a ...

welcome to YWS... don't be upest by the critiques... they are here to tell you the truth etc. I don't think this was a bad attempt... in fact some of ...

Emotional...... and the imagery is powerful. The reptition of the word "glow" is a little boring but I'm sure you can think of an alternative word? Well done, I'm printing ...

i love autumn too. The crispy orange leaves... love crunching them under my feet. Anyway, Great imagery. Made me all warm and fuzzy :D *hug for your great work!* lexy ...

I like a bit of relationship romance. Its really sweet. Would have liked to see more of it though :cry: *hugs for your great effort* Lexy x

At last some chick flick poetry!!! I like this! Its a good simple issue right at the centre of a poem which flows really well. I can relate to this ...

I've made sure to read your other poetry after this and must say I liked this the most. It would be great if you wrote another with a rhyming scheme ...