Autumn Sheds

by Chandni

Published September 20, 2006

It’s the staring out the window,
The view given by nature
and all its belongings.

Autumn breaks
And sheds its leaves,
Take aware the season’s welcome,
Remember its brave departure.
Cause autumn sheds in harmony,
Fulfills the longing for what’s to come;
“The summer’s bliss and blossom”

Autumn, season where nature sows,
Pleasant, peaceful memories
Waiting to be relived.

I found this cool background that fits this poem :) decided to give it a show ;)

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Jess_14
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Jess_14 wrote a review Review · Jan 10, 2007

I loved it! Especially the rythm of leaves and harmony in this stanza:

Autumn breaks
And sheds its leaves,
Take aware the season’s welcome,
Remember its brave departure.
Cause autumn sheds in harmony,
Fulfills the longing for what’s to come;
“The summer’s bliss and blossom”


Great Job! =)

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lexy
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lexy wrote a review Review · Oct 19, 2006

i love autumn too.
The crispy orange leaves... love crunching them under my feet.
Anyway,
Great imagery. Made me all warm and fuzzy :D
*hug for your great work!*
lexy x

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Myth
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Myth commented Comment · Sep 21, 2006

I love autumn and the picture created from reading this.

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timjim77
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timjim77 commented Comment · Sep 20, 2006

Wonderful imagery, and great title. Watch your punctuation in a few places, especially the semicolon. I love the last stanza. What a wonderful way to describe it, 'waiting to be relived'.

Beautiful work.



Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love.
— "Hamlet," William Shakespeare