lewiseyles

this is an interesting poem. i don't know if you did it intentionally but you seem to strike at the idea of rules and guidelines set by parents that restrict ...

first off, can i ask what genre you would be aiming for? the sophisticated use of lexis is used efficiently but not overdone, if you do get any comment regarding ...

as a first poem it is highly emotive, something new people struggle with, I guess. The anaphora of of "i wish you" for the last four lines is an interesting ...

i have to say, i don't normally attract to a poem of this genre, but i was pleasantly surprised. the voice of the poem, presumably you, reveals a lot of ...

the inner built in frustration in this poem is really all that entices me with this poem. i understand as a youth we have all this boredom that is constantly ...

interesting poem that inspires plenty of wonderful imagery. the semantic field of imagery is a good idea to take on as music and poetry perfectly fit hand in hand. this ...

A popular opinion of this poem is the natural flow. I feel obliged to concur as it read wonderfully in my mind. The first line spiked my interest and I ...

This poem confused me a little bit. it seemed at the start that your cat was deified, yet as it draws to a close she has to flee. I understand ...

What the other reviewer seems to have missed out is the title, that hints despair and turmoil. The fact that the poem does not seem to be going to any ...

This sort of poem is exactly what i feel is needed to inspire our generation into engaging with poetry. I felt an underlying theme of being young and wanting to ...